Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
List when you shop. Yes, I usually make a list when I go to supermarket, especially for daily items like sauce or milk. I often forget what to buy and my mother wants me to remember, so making a list help us.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I must make a list for my design work and study tasks. It helps me to stay organized and focused. I usually use a digital app to keep track on my work list. I get a sense of accomplishments when checking off completed tasks.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Actually, I think some people might not be used to making lists and don't see their benefits. Maybe they haven't found a suitable way of least making that works for them, so they don't like it.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper. For me it's more convenient. For example, I often write my study tasks on a list using a date app on my phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时应更自然流畅,避免重复和语法错误。例如,“List when you shop”不完整,且“help us”应为“helps us”。建议使用完整句子并注意主谓一致。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list, especially for daily essentials like sauce and milk. It helps me remember what to buy and ensures I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,但“keep track on”应改为“keep track of”,表达更准确。建议注意介词搭配,提升语言自然度。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make lists for my design projects and study tasks. Using a digital app helps me keep track of my work, and I feel accomplished when I check off completed items.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和拼写错误,如“least making”应为“list making”。建议注意拼写和表达准确性,同时丰富细节使回答更具体。
Ví dụ: Some people may dislike making lists because they are not accustomed to it or haven't found a method that suits their style, so they don't experience its benefits.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但“date app”表达不准确,应为“calendar app”。建议使用更准确的词汇,并适当扩展细节。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. For instance, I use a calendar app to organize my study tasks efficiently.
× I usually make a list when I go to supermarket, especially for daily items like sauce or milk.
✓ I usually make a list when I go to the supermarket, especially for daily items like sauces or milk.
这里'supermarket'前缺少定冠词'the',因为特指某个超市;'sauce'应使用复数'sauces',表示多种调味品。
× so making a list help us.
✓ so making a list helps us.
主语'making a list'是第三人称单数,谓语动词应加-s,改为'helps'。
× I usually use a digital app to keep track on my work list.
✓ I usually use a digital app to keep track of my work list.
短语'keep track of'是固定搭配,不能用'on',应改为'of'。
× Maybe they haven't found a suitable way of least making that works for them, so they don't like it.
✓ Maybe they haven't found a suitable way of list making that works for them, so they don't like it.
'least making'是拼写错误,应为'list making',表示“列清单”的方式。