Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No, I seldom make a list.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
No, I used to make a work schedule by found it difficult to follow it so I gave up and it didn't work for me.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think some people don't like meeting this because they find it troublesome and time consuming.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Even though I seldom make lists, if I had to, I prefer to use my phone because it is convenient for me to check whenever I need and carrying a piece of paper will raise the risk of losing it.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较简短,缺乏细节和理由。建议增加原因或具体情况,使回答更丰富自然。
Ví dụ: No, I seldom make a list when I shop because I usually buy the same items and can remember them easily.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 句子结构不够清晰,有语法错误。建议使用连贯的句子表达原因,并适当使用连接词。
Ví dụ: I used to make a work schedule, but I found it difficult to follow, so I gave up because it didn't help me stay organized.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有词汇错误(meeting应为making),表达不够准确。建议注意词汇使用,并提供更具体的理由。
Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it troublesome and time-consuming to write everything down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较完整且有理由支持,但句子稍长,建议适当分句使表达更清晰。
Ví dụ: Although I seldom make lists, if I had to, I would prefer using my phone because it's convenient to check anytime. Also, carrying paper risks losing it.
× No, I used to make a work schedule by found it difficult to follow it so I gave up and it didn't work for me.
✓ No, I used to make a work schedule but found it difficult to follow it, so I gave up and it didn't work for me.
句中 'by found' 用法错误,应使用连词 'but' 连接两个分句,且 'found' 是过去式,符合时态要求。建议用 'but' 代替 'by',使句子结构正确。
× I think some people don't like meeting this because they find it troublesome and time consuming.
✓ I think some people don't like making this because they find it troublesome and time consuming.
动词 'like' 后应接动名词形式,'meeting' 应改为 'making',因为这里指的是 'making lists'。另外,'this' 指代不明确,结合上下文应为 'making this'。
× Even though I seldom make lists, if I had to, I prefer to use my phone because it is convenient for me to check whenever I need and carrying a piece of paper will raise the risk of losing it.
✓ Even though I seldom make lists, if I had to, I would prefer to use my phone because it is convenient for me to check whenever I need, and carrying a piece of paper raises the risk of losing it.
条件句中 'if I had to' 表示假设,应使用 'would prefer' 表达假设语气。'carrying a piece of paper will raise' 中 'will' 不合适,改为一般现在时 'raises' 表示习惯性事实。