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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, I often make a shopping list while shopping because I find it efficient to list all the groceries I want and then there will be nothing left behind.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Does it work? Yes. I often make A to do list for all my tasks in work and I find it really efficient because I can schedule my time properly according to the list.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

I believe some people are more task oriented so it may be uncomfortable for them to combine themselves with the To Do List.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to make a list by phone because I can set some alarms or notifications on my phone. Then it would be more efficient for me to do my tasks then.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点,但句子结构稍显重复,且缺少连接词使表达更流畅。建议使用连接词如“so”或“therefore”来增强逻辑性,并尝试用不同的表达方式避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the groceries I need, so I don't forget anything.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“a to do list”应为“a to-do list”,且句子开头重复提问部分显得不自然。建议直接回答问题,并使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work tasks, which helps me schedule my time efficiently and complete everything on time.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够清晰,‘combine themselves with the To Do List’不自然。建议用更准确的表达说明原因,并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to focus on tasks spontaneously, so following a strict to-do list feels uncomfortable to them.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答中重复使用“phone”,且‘Then it would be more efficient for me to do my tasks then’表达重复且不够自然。建议简化表达并使用连接词。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because I can set alarms and notifications, which helps me complete my tasks more efficiently.

Ngữ pháp

Article errors

× I often make A to do list for all my tasks in work and I find it really efficient because I can schedule my time properly according to the list.

I often make a to-do list for all my tasks at work and I find it really efficient because I can schedule my time properly according to the list.

这里的“a to do list”中的“A”应为小写“a”,且“to do list”应连字符连接为“to-do list”,表示“待办事项清单”。另外,“in work”应改为“at work”,因为表示在工作场所时用介词“at”。建议注意冠词大小写和固定搭配的介词使用。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I often make A to do list for all my tasks in work and I find it really efficient because I can schedule my time properly according to the list.

I often make a to-do list for all my tasks at work and I find it really efficient because I can schedule my time properly according to the list.

“in work”用法不正确,表示“在工作”时应使用介词“at”,即“at work”。这是固定搭配,需注意介词的正确使用。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I believe some people are more task oriented so it may be uncomfortable for them to combine themselves with the To Do List.

I believe some people are more task-oriented, so it may be uncomfortable for them to associate themselves with the to-do list.

“combine themselves with”用法不当,通常“combine”不与反身代词连用,且表达“与待办事项清单结合”应使用“associate with”或类似表达。此外,“To Do List”应统一小写为“to-do list”。建议注意动词搭配和大小写规范。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I believe some people are more task oriented so it may be uncomfortable for them to combine themselves with the To Do List.

I believe some people are more task-oriented, so it may be uncomfortable for them to associate themselves with the to-do list.

“task oriented”应为复合形容词“task-oriented”,中间需加连字符,表示“以任务为导向的”。这是形容词的正确写法,需注意复合形容词的连字符使用。

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