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Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save time and reduce my anxiety by showing I won't forget anything important that makes the whole process more efficient. After I finishing list, I always shop spontaneously to explore new products that catch my eye.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me alleviate anxiety and save time. For example, I usually use a digital map which send me reminders so that I don't forget any important deadlines. This method keeps me organized and focused on completing the most urgent things effectively.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

I think 1 main reason is that people don't have the habit of making lists and also when they see a long list, it can make them overwhelmed and feel stressed. Besides, they might feel restricted by a list and prefer to finish tasks spontaneously without playing too much.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer making list on my phone because I always carry it with me, which makes it very convenient. Besides, I can easily add it and rearrange the items whenever I need to do. What's more, checking of completed tasks on my phone gives me a sense of accomplishment and helps me stay organized.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答内容较丰富,但存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题,例如“After I finishing list”应为“After finishing the list”。建议注意动词形式和句子结构,使表达更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save time and reduces my anxiety by ensuring I don't forget anything important, which makes the whole process more efficient. After finishing the list, I like to shop spontaneously to explore new products that catch my eye.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,内容具体,但存在语法错误,如“which send me reminders”应为“which sends me reminders”。建议注意主谓一致和细节表达,使语言更准确。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me alleviate anxiety and save time. For example, I usually use a digital app which sends me reminders so that I don't forget any important deadlines. This method keeps me organized and focused on completing the most urgent tasks effectively.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够自然,且有语法和用词错误,如“make them overwhelmed”应为“make them feel overwhelmed”,“without playing too much”表达不清。建议加强句子连贯性和准确用词。

Ví dụ: I think one main reason is that some people don't have the habit of making lists. Also, when they see a long list, it can make them feel overwhelmed and stressed. Besides, they might feel restricted by a list and prefer to complete tasks spontaneously without too much planning.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容完整,但存在语法错误,如“making list”应为“making lists”,“checking of completed tasks”应为“checking completed tasks”。建议注意名词复数和介词使用,使表达更准确。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, which makes it very convenient. Besides, I can easily add and rearrange items whenever I need to. What's more, checking completed tasks on my phone gives me a sense of accomplishment and helps me stay organized.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the present participle form

× After I finishing list, I always shop spontaneously to explore new products that catch my eye.

After I finish the list, I always shop spontaneously to explore new products that catch my eye.

句中 'After I finishing list' 中 'finishing' 用法错误,应使用动词原形 'finish' 来表示动作完成后的状态。此外,'list' 前缺少冠词 'the',应为 'the list'。正确表达为 'After I finish the list'。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× For example, I usually use a digital map which send me reminders so that I don't forget any important deadlines.

For example, I usually use a digital map which sends me reminders so that I don't forget any important deadlines.

句中 'which send me reminders' 中 'send' 与先行词 'digital map'(单数)不一致,动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'sends'。

Singular and plural issue

× I think 1 main reason is that people don't have the habit of making lists and also when they see a long list, it can make them overwhelmed and feel stressed.

I think one main reason is that people don't have the habit of making lists and also when they see a long list, it can make them feel overwhelmed and stressed.

句中 'make them overwhelmed' 用法不当,应为 'make them feel overwhelmed',因为 'make' 后需接感官动词 'feel' 来表达感受。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Besides, they might feel restricted by a list and prefer to finish tasks spontaneously without playing too much.

Besides, they might feel restricted by a list and prefer to finish tasks spontaneously without planning too much.

句中 'without playing too much' 用词错误,应为 'without planning too much',因为 'playing' 与语境不符,正确表达应为 'planning'(计划)。

Singular and plural issue

× I prefer making list on my phone because I always carry it with me, which makes it very convenient.

I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, which makes it very convenient.

句中 'making list' 应为复数形式 'making lists',因为通常指多次制作购物清单。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Besides, I can easily add it and rearrange the items whenever I need to do.

Besides, I can easily add to it and rearrange the items whenever I need to.

句中 'add it' 用法错误,应为 'add to it',表示向列表中添加内容。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× What's more, checking of completed tasks on my phone gives me a sense of accomplishment and helps me stay organized.

What's more, checking completed tasks on my phone gives me a sense of accomplishment and helps me stay organized.

句中 'checking of completed tasks' 中 'of' 多余,应直接用 'checking completed tasks'。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
LongLengthy; Soon; Yearn for
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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