Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes I do, I always make a lease when I was shop uh, because I don't have a strong memory to remember all things that I need to buy, so it is necessary to make a lease.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I always make a list for my work. It it is very important to make sure you can finish everything. For example, every day I need to make a list to to to.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Uh, because making this can improve their work efficiency and it can help them don't forget anything and they can do do important things and finish important task.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer my Glee's own phone because you can see your lease everywhere and it is easy and convenient to make on the phone and see on the phone.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有发音错误和词汇使用错误,如“lease”应为“list”,且句子结构不够自然。建议注意发音准确,使用正确词汇,并简洁表达原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I tend to forget things easily, so it helps me remember everything I need to buy.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇和不完整的句子,缺乏具体细节。建议避免重复,补充具体例子,使回答更完整和连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and ensures I complete everything on time. For example, I list my daily tasks and check them off as I finish.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答内容与问题不符,且语法错误较多。建议理解问题后,给出合理原因,并注意语法和句子完整性。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember tasks mentally instead.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有词汇错误和表达不清,如“Glee's own phone”和“lease”。建议使用正确词汇,表达清晰简洁。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can access them anytime and anywhere easily.
× Yes I do, I always make a lease when I was shop uh, because I don't have a strong memory to remember all things that I need to buy, so it is necessary to make a lease.
✓ Yes I do, I always make a list when I shop, because I don't have a strong memory to remember all the things that I need to buy, so it is necessary to make a list.
这里的错误是时态使用不当。'when I was shop' 应该是现在时 'when I shop',因为描述的是习惯性动作。并且 'lease' 应为 'list'。建议使用一般现在时描述习惯动作。
× Yes I do, I always make a lease when I was shop uh, because I don't have a strong memory to remember all things that I need to buy, so it is necessary to make a lease.
✓ Yes I do, I always make a list when I shop, because I don't have a strong memory to remember all the things that I need to buy, so it is necessary to make a list.
'all things' 应该用 'all the things',因为这里指特定的需要购买的东西。'lease' 是拼写错误,应为 'list'。
× Yes I do. I always make a list for my work. It it is very important to make sure you can finish everything. For example, every day I need to make a list to to to.
✓ Yes I do. I always make a list for my work. It is very important to make sure I can finish everything. For example, every day I need to make a list to organize my tasks.
句子中 'It it is' 重复,应改为 'It is'。'make sure you can finish everything' 中 'you' 应改为 'I',保持主语一致。'to to to' 是口误,应补充完整表达。
× It it is very important to make sure you can finish everything.
✓ It is very important to make sure I can finish everything.
这里主语是学生自己,应该用第一人称 'I',而不是泛指的 'you'。保持主语一致性。
× Uh, because making this can improve their work efficiency and it can help them don't forget anything and they can do do important things and finish important task.
✓ Uh, because making this can improve their work efficiency and it can help them not forget anything and they can do important things and finish important tasks.
'help them don't forget' 语法错误,应为 'help them not forget'。'do do' 是重复,应去掉一个。'important task' 应为复数 'important tasks',与前文复数保持一致。
× Uh, because making this can improve their work efficiency and it can help them don't forget anything and they can do do important things and finish important task.
✓ Uh, because making this can improve their work efficiency and it can help them not forget anything and they can do important things and finish important tasks.
'important task' 应为复数形式 'important tasks',因为前文提到的是多个任务。
× I prefer my Glee's own phone because you can see your lease everywhere and it is easy and convenient to make on the phone and see on the phone.
✓ I prefer my own phone because I can see my list everywhere and it is easy and convenient to make and see the list on the phone.
'my Glee's own phone' 语法错误,应为 'my own phone'。'you' 和 'your' 应改为第一人称 'I' 和 'my',保持主语一致。'lease' 应为 'list'。