List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有一些语法错误和重复的填充词，影响了表达的流畅性。建议减少“uh”等填充词的使用，注意动词形式和时态的一致性，例如将“make listed”改为“make a list”，并且将“saving money”改为“save money”。此外，回答可以更简洁，避免冗余。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me shop efficiently and save money. For example, I prepare a list of items I need before going to the supermarket.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复词汇和语法错误，如“my my school work workout”和“what should I do first”的结构不正确。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的语法表达优先顺序。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make lists for my academic work because I have a heavy workload. It helps me prioritize tasks and manage my time effectively.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点，但存在语法错误和用词不当，如“some someone”。建议注意单复数一致，避免重复，并用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom and flexibility. For example, they prefer to do things spontaneously.

Gợi ý: 回答中有多余的填充词“uh”和“umm”，影响流畅性。建议减少这些词的使用，注意动词形式一致，如“help us manage”而非“help us to manage, managing”。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because the internet is well developed, and there are many convenient apps that help me manage my lists easily.

× A clear schedule may help me to shop effectively and saving money.

✓ A clear schedule may help me to shop effectively and save money.

这里“help”后面应该接动词原形“save”，而不是动名词“saving”。动词“help”后面通常跟动词原形，表示帮助做某事。

× I often make listed before shopping.

✓ I often make a list before shopping.

“make listed”是错误的表达，应该用“make a list”，表示“列清单”。“listed”是过去分词，不适合此处用法。

× my my school work workout is really heavy that I it's really essential to make a list for what should I do first.

✓ My school workload is really heavy, so it's really essential to make a list of what I should do first.

原句结构混乱，重复“my”，且“work workout”错误，应为“workload”。“that I it's”语法错误，需用连词“so”连接两句。

× some someone prefer to do whatever they want to do.

✓ Some people prefer to do whatever they want to do.

“some someone”重复且错误，应使用“some people”表示“一些人”。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because, uh, nowadays the Internet is developed so well and the phone is more convenient for us to use.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because, nowadays, the Internet has developed so well and the phone is more convenient for us to use.

“the Internet is developed”时态不对，应该用现在完成时“has developed”表示互联网的发展过程已经完成。

× there's various apps that help us to manage, uh, managing our list.

✓ There are various apps that help us manage our list.

“help”后面应接动词原形“manage”，而不是动名词“managing”。此外，“there's”应改为“there are”，因为“apps”是复数。

× there's various apps that help us to manage, uh, managing our list.

✓ There are various apps that help us manage our list.

“there's”是“there is”的缩写，后面接复数名词“apps”时应使用“there are”。