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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Do you make a list when you shop? I didn't use to make a shopping list because I thought it was a waste of time. However, now I always prepare a list before I go shopping because it helps me avoid buying things I already have and keeps me focused on what I actually need.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I always make a list before starting work because as a nurse, effective time management is crucial. Making a list helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important tasks such as checking patients vital signs or administering medication on time.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

I think it depends on a person's personality. Some people don't like making this because they prefer to be spontaneous and don't want to plan everything in advance. However, I found planning very important because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important tasks.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I used to make a list on the paper because at that time we don't have a technologies such as smartphone. But now as I always carry my phone with me, it's easier for me to write a list on my phone.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 7.0Phát âm: 6.5Ngữ pháp: 6.5Từ vựng: 6.5

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid repeating the examiner's question at the start. Also, use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect your ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 4-5 sentences.

Ví dụ: I didn't use to make a shopping list because I thought it was a waste of time. However, I now always prepare one because it helps me avoid buying duplicates and keeps me focused on what I actually need.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 90.0

Gợi ý: Good direct answer with relevant details. To improve, try to use linking words like 'for example' or 'such as' more naturally and check for small grammar points, e.g., 'patients' vital signs' with an apostrophe. Also, keep sentences concise and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list before starting work because, as a nurse, effective time management is crucial. For example, it helps me remember to check patients' vital signs and administer medication on time.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural by avoiding phrases like 'making this'. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'however' effectively, and try to vary your vocabulary to avoid repetition, e.g., use 'planning' or 'list-making' instead of 'making this'.

Ví dụ: I think it depends on a person's personality because some prefer to be spontaneous and dislike planning everything in advance. However, I find planning important as it helps me stay organised and remember important tasks.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains some grammar errors and awkward phrasing. For example, say 'I used to make lists on paper because we didn't have technologies like smartphones then.' Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise. Use linking words like 'but' and 'now' appropriately.

Ví dụ: I used to make lists on paper because we didn't have smartphones back then. But now, since I always carry my phone, it's easier for me to write lists on it.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× But now as I always carry my phone with me, it's easier for me to write a list on my phone.

But now, as I always carry my phone with me, it's easier for me to write a list on my phone.

A comma is needed after 'now' to separate the introductory phrase from the main clause, improving sentence clarity and flow.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Some people don't like making this because they prefer to be spontaneous and don't want to plan everything in advance.

Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and don't want to plan everything in advance.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrect here because it does not clearly refer to 'making lists'. Replacing 'this' with 'lists' clarifies the meaning.

Singular and plural issue

× I used to make a list on the paper because at that time we don't have a technologies such as smartphone.

I used to make a list on paper because at that time we didn't have technologies such as smartphones.

'Technologies' should be plural without 'a', and 'smartphone' should be plural as 'smartphones' to match the plural noun 'technologies'. Also, 'don't have' should be past tense 'didn't have' to match the past time reference.

Past tense issue

× I used to make a list on the paper because at that time we don't have a technologies such as smartphone.

I used to make a list on paper because at that time we didn't have technologies such as smartphones.

The verb tense 'don't have' is present tense but the sentence refers to a past time, so it should be changed to past tense 'didn't have'.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I used to make a list on the paper because at that time we don't have a technologies such as smartphone.

I used to make a list on paper because at that time we didn't have technologies such as smartphones.

The preposition 'on the paper' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'on paper' when referring to writing lists.

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