Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me prioritize the items I need to buy first. For example, when I go to the supermarket every two weeks, having a list saves me time and provides me from forgetting anything important. This way I can shop more efficiently and avoid unnecessary purchases.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks more efficiently. For example, when I plan my daily activities, having a list allows me to prioritize tasks and focus on the most important ones first. This method saves me time and improves my consideration throughout the day.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people don't like making less because they may feel stressed by the pressure of having to complete tasks every day. For example, seeing a long list can make them feel overwhelmed and anxious, which reduce their motivation. Therefore, they prefer to stay relaxed, flexible, and handle things spontaneously.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than on paper because it's much more convenient and practical. For example, I always carry my phone with me so I can easily update or check my list anytime. Also, digital lists are less likely to be lost or forgotten compared to paper ones.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较自然且内容相关,但有语法错误("provides me from"应为"prevents me from"),且句子稍显冗长。建议注意语法准确性,避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me prioritize the items I need to buy first. For example, when I go to the supermarket every two weeks, having a list saves me time and prevents me from forgetting anything important. This way, I can shop more efficiently and avoid unnecessary purchases.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,但"improves my consideration"表达不够准确,建议使用更贴切的词汇,如"improves my focus"或"helps me stay organized"。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks more efficiently. For example, when I plan my daily activities, having a list allows me to prioritize tasks and focus on the most important ones first. This method saves me time and helps me stay organized throughout the day.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中有拼写错误("making less"应为"making lists"),且部分句子语法不准确("which reduce"应为"which reduces")。建议注意拼写和主谓一致,提升表达准确性。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they may feel stressed by the pressure of having to complete tasks every day. For example, seeing a long list can make them feel overwhelmed and anxious, which reduces their motivation. Therefore, they prefer to stay relaxed, flexible, and handle things spontaneously.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 回答自然且内容具体,表达清晰。建议在句子间加入更多连接词,使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone rather than on paper because it's much more convenient and practical. For example, I always carry my phone with me, so I can easily update or check my list anytime. Moreover, digital lists are less likely to be lost or forgotten compared to paper ones.
× having a list saves me time and provides me from forgetting anything important.
✓ having a list saves me time and prevents me from forgetting anything important.
这里的动词短语应该是 'prevent someone from doing something',而不是 'provide someone from doing something'。'provide' 意为提供,不适合此处表达防止忘记的意思。建议使用 'prevent' 来表达防止的含义。
× which reduce their motivation.
✓ which reduces their motivation.
主语是 'which' 指代前面的单数名词 'a long list',因此动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'reduces'。动词与主语不一致导致语法错误。
× Some people don't like making less because they may feel stressed by the pressure of having to complete tasks every day.
✓ Some people don't like making lists because they may feel stressed by the pressure of having to complete tasks every day.
这里 'making less' 是拼写错误,应该是 'making lists',表示制作清单。'less' 是形容词或副词,不能用作名词。此处应使用复数名词 'lists'。