Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a shopping slip, especially when I need to buy food and vegetables. I find it very useful because it ensures I don't forget any important ingredients, particularly when I want to try to cook cooking new recipe. This way I can shop more efficiently and avoid buying unnecessary items.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list for my work, especially at the beginning of the day. For example, I write down the tags and I want to complete, such as studying series or preparing assessments. This may help me stay organized and manage my time more efficiently.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think some people don't like making this because they find them too restrictive. For example, they prefer to broaden us to do things whenever they feel like it rather than following a fixed plan. Also, making a list can sometimes feel stressful if they worry about completing everything on time.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient to access and update my plans anytime, anywhere. If use papers, I have to carry it with me and sometimes I might forget it, which can be quite inconvenient. Therefore, using my phone helps me stay organized more efficiently.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答基本清晰,但存在一些语法错误和重复表达,如“cook cooking new recipe”应简化为“try a new recipe”。建议注意语法准确性,避免重复,同时可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list, especially when I need to buy food and vegetables. It helps me remember all the important ingredients, particularly when I want to try a new recipe. Therefore, I can shop more efficiently and avoid buying unnecessary items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在表达不清和词汇使用不当的问题,如“write down the tags”不明确,建议使用更准确的词汇和表达方式,并增加连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list for my work at the beginning of the day. For example, I write down the tasks I want to complete, such as studying a series or preparing assessments. This helps me stay organized and manage my time more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不准确,如“broaden us to do things”不合适,建议使用更准确的表达,并注意句子结构的完整性和逻辑性。
Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they find them too restrictive. For example, they prefer to do things spontaneously rather than following a fixed plan. Also, making a list can sometimes feel stressful if they worry about completing everything on time.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但存在小的语法错误,如“If use papers”应为“If I use paper”。建议注意主语完整,避免小错误,同时可以增加连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Well, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's very convenient to access and update my plans anytime, anywhere. If I use paper, I have to carry it with me and sometimes I might forget it, which can be quite inconvenient. Therefore, using my phone helps me stay organized more efficiently.
× I want to try to cook cooking new recipe.
✓ I want to try to cook a new recipe.
这里的错误是动词后面不应该接动名词形式'cooking',而应该直接用动词不定式或名词短语。正确表达是'cook a new recipe',表示尝试做一道新菜。
× For example, I write down the tags and I want to complete, such as studying series or preparing assessments.
✓ For example, I write down the tasks I want to complete, such as studying series or preparing assessments.
这里'tags'应为'tasks',因为上下文指的是工作任务,'tags'是标签的意思,使用错误。
× I think some people don't like making this because they find them too restrictive.
✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they find them too restrictive.
'making this'指代不明确,应改为'making lists',与前文呼应,'them'指代复数名词,需保持一致。
× For example, they prefer to broaden us to do things whenever they feel like it rather than following a fixed plan.
✓ For example, they prefer to broaden their options to do things whenever they feel like it rather than following a fixed plan.
'broaden us'用法错误,'us'不合适,应改为'broaden their options'或类似表达,表示扩大选择。
× If use papers, I have to carry it with me and sometimes I might forget it, which can be quite inconvenient.
✓ If I use paper, I have to carry it with me and sometimes I might forget it, which can be quite inconvenient.
缺少主语'I',且'papers'应为不可数名词'paper','it'指代单数,保持一致。