Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Absolutely. When I shop every day, I absolutely make a list. When I shop, for example, I will list all the items that I will buy later. For example, today I want to buy a apple and my list are definitely have a apple.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list for my work before I go to work because it helped me stay organized and forgotten anything important. For instance, today I plan to work about my Python project, so I include them on my list to make sure I don't miss them. Making a list also save me time and.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think some people doesn't like making this because I think their memorization is really good, so I think they didn't have any leads and they remember it very well.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my rather than on paper because I think if I write on paper I will lose it and opposite sides if I write on my and my are always on my pocket so I 100% sure that my phone is doesn't lose.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和语法错误,表达不够自然。建议避免重复使用相同词汇,如“absolutely”,并注意冠词使用(a apple应为an apple)。回答应简洁明了,避免冗余。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget anything. For instance, today my list includes apples and other groceries I need.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,如时态不一致(helped应为helps),句子不完整,表达不够连贯。建议注意时态一致,句子完整,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list before work because it helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting important tasks. For example, today I included my Python project tasks to ensure I complete them on time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误明显,如主谓不一致(doesn't应为don't),表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构,明确表达观点,并使用恰当的连接词。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and prefer to remember things without writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在严重语法和表达错误,句子不完整且难以理解。建议简化表达,注意句子结构和词汇使用,明确比较两者的优缺点。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's less likely to get lost compared to paper, and I always have my phone with me.
× For example, today I want to buy a apple and my list are definitely have a apple.
✓ For example, today I want to buy an apple and my list definitely has an apple.
这里的错误是单复数和冠词使用错误。'a apple' 应该是 'an apple',因为apple以元音音素开头;'my list are' 应该是 'my list has',因为list是单数,动词要用单数形式。建议注意单复数和冠词的正确使用。
× Yes, I always make a list for my work before I go to work because it helped me stay organized and forgotten anything important.
✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work before I go to work because it helps me stay organized and not forget anything important.
这里时态使用不当。句子描述的是习惯动作,应使用一般现在时,'helped' 应改为 'helps','forgotten' 应改为 'not forget'。建议根据时间背景选择正确时态。
× For instance, today I plan to work about my Python project, so I include them on my list to make sure I don't miss them.
✓ For instance, today I plan to work on my Python project, so I include it on my list to make sure I don't miss it.
'Python project' 是单数,代词应使用单数 'it',而不是复数 'them'。建议注意代词与先行词的数一致。
× Making a list also save me time and.
✓ Making a list also saves me time.
句子结构不完整,缺少宾语或后续内容。'save' 应为 'saves' 以符合主语单数。建议确保句子完整且主谓一致。
× I think some people doesn't like making this because I think their memorization is really good, so I think they didn't have any leads and they remember it very well.
✓ I think some people don't like making this because their memorization is really good, so I think they don't need any leads and they remember it very well.
'some people' 是复数,助动词应为 'don't' 而非 'doesn't'。'didn't have' 应改为 'don't need' 以保持时态一致。建议注意主谓一致和时态一致。
× I prefer to make a list on my rather than on paper because I think if I write on paper I will lose it and opposite sides if I write on my and my are always on my pocket so I 100% sure that my phone is doesn't lose.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because I think if I write on paper I will lose it, but if I write on my phone, it is always in my pocket so I am 100% sure that my phone won't get lost.
句中缺少名词 'phone','opposite sides' 用法错误,应使用 'but' 连接转折句。'my are always on my pocket' 结构错误,应为 'it is always in my pocket'。'is doesn't lose' 语法错误,应为 'won't get lost'。建议注意介词搭配和句子连贯性。