Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Honestly, I don't make a list when I go shopping because I don't have that habit and I tend to buy things spontaneously.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Honestly, yes, I always make a list for my workload uh because it's helped me manage my time better.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think because it take a lot of times to, uh, thinking, uh, what should they, uh, write down? And some people just just be for doing without list like spontaneously.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Honestly, I prefer making a lace on my phone because it's more convenient for me. And you know why I take my phones everywhere I go so I can't quickly take a note on my phone rather than on paper.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên nhưng nên tránh lặp từ và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn. Bạn có thể sử dụng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to buy things spontaneously. However, this sometimes leads me to forget important items, so I try to be more careful.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: Bạn trả lời rõ ràng nhưng nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như "uh" và mở rộng câu trả lời bằng cách giải thích thêm về lợi ích của việc làm danh sách.
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize tasks efficiently. As a result, I can manage my time better and meet deadlines more easily.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ ngữ lặp lại. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp hơn.
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time to decide what to write. Also, they prefer to act spontaneously without planning.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý phát âm chính xác từ và tránh lỗi chính tả như "lace" thay vì "list". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có liên kết mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. Since I always carry my phone, I can quickly take notes anytime, unlike using paper.
× I think because it take a lot of times to, uh, thinking, uh, what should they, uh, write down?
✓ I think because it takes a lot of time to, uh, think, uh, what they, uh, should write down?
The verb 'take' should be in the third person singular form 'takes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'times' should be singular 'time' because the phrase 'a lot of time' is uncountable. Additionally, 'thinking' should be changed to the base form 'think' after 'to'. (Explanation in English: The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb must be 'takes' (third person singular). 'A lot of time' is an uncountable noun phrase, so 'time' should be singular. After 'to', the verb should be in base form, so 'thinking' is incorrect.)
× I think because it take a lot of times to, uh, thinking, uh, what should they, uh, write down?
✓ I think because it takes a lot of time to, uh, think, uh, what they, uh, should write down?
After the preposition 'to' in this context, the verb should be in its base form 'think', not the '-ing' form 'thinking'. (Explanation in English: The verb following 'to' as part of an infinitive should be in base form, so 'thinking' is incorrect here.)
× I think because it take a lot of times to, uh, thinking, uh, what should they, uh, write down?
✓ I think because it takes a lot of time to, uh, think, uh, what they, uh, should write down?
The phrase 'a lot of times' is incorrect here; it should be 'a lot of time' because 'time' is uncountable in this context. (Explanation in English: 'Time' is uncountable when referring to duration, so 'a lot of time' is correct, not 'a lot of times'.)
× And some people just just be for doing without list like spontaneously.
✓ And some people just do things without a list, like spontaneously.
The phrase 'just be for doing' is incorrect. The correct form is 'just do things'. Also, 'list' should have an article 'a' before it. The sentence structure is corrected to make sense. (Explanation in English: 'Be for doing' is not a correct verb phrase here; 'do things' is appropriate. Also, countable nouns like 'list' need an article 'a' when singular.)
× Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
✓ Do you prefer to make a list on paper or on your phone?
The preposition 'on' should be used before both 'paper' and 'your phone' for parallel structure. (Explanation in English: When listing alternatives with prepositions, the preposition should be repeated for clarity and parallelism.)
× Honestly, I prefer making a lace on my phone because it's more convenient for me.
✓ Honestly, I prefer making a list on my phone because it's more convenient for me.
The word 'lace' is a typo and should be 'list'. (Explanation in English: 'Lace' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is 'list'.)