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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and avoid buying things I actually don't need.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I often make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete my tasks efficiently.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

I think some people don't like making lists because they think it's too time consuming and don't like feeling tied down.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient. I can access them anywhere, anytime and set reminders to improve my productivity.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达清晰且自然,但可以通过增加具体细节使内容更丰富,例如说明你如何制定购物清单或举例说明购物清单带来的好处。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember all the items I need, such as vegetables and dairy products, and prevents me from buying unnecessary things, which saves both time and money.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,但缺少具体细节。建议增加具体例子或说明如何通过清单提高工作效率。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work, which helps me prioritize tasks like replying to emails and preparing reports, so I can complete my work more efficiently and meet deadlines.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但可以更具体,增加原因的细节或举例说明。

Ví dụ: I think some people avoid making lists because they feel it takes too much time to write everything down, and they prefer to stay flexible rather than feeling restricted by a fixed plan.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 90.0

Gợi ý: 回答自然且内容具体,表达了偏好和理由。可以稍微丰富细节,比如说明使用手机清单的具体功能。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's very convenient; I can access my lists anytime and anywhere, set reminders for important tasks, and easily edit or delete items as needed.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I think some people don't like making lists because they think it's too time consuming and don't like feeling tied down.

I think some people don't like making lists because they think it's too time-consuming and don't like feeling tied down.

这里的 "time consuming" 应该用连字符连接,构成复合形容词 "time-consuming",表示“耗时的”。这是形容词的正确用法,避免歧义。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient.

I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient.

此句中 "on my phone" 介词使用正确,无需修改。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I can access them anywhere, anytime and set reminders to improve my productivity.

I can access them anywhere, anytime, and set reminders to improve my productivity.

在列举多个动作时,最后两个并列项之间应加逗号(Oxford comma)以增强句子清晰度,尤其在正式写作中建议使用。

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