Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No, I don't make a list when I shop because I don't usually shop and I usually don't need a list to remember things to buy.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do, but it doesn't work very well because I simply forget to look at the list and check the list every time because it's a very tiring for me.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think that it's because it umm, they can't follow the list, and making a list does need a lot of thinking and planning.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on paper because I think that papers are more efficient and I'd like to decorate my list to make it more, umm, convenient and pretty.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答は直接的で自然ですが、理由の説明がやや曖昧で繰り返しが見られます。より具体的な理由を簡潔に述べ、冗長な表現を避けると良いでしょう。
Ví dụ: No, I don't make a list when I shop because I shop infrequently and usually remember what I need without writing it down.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答は質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや冗長な表現があります。より簡潔で正確な表現を使い、理由を明確に述べることが重要です。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for work, but they are not very effective because I often forget to check them, which makes the process tiring.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答に曖昧な言葉(umm)が含まれており、文の構造もやや不自然です。より流暢で明確な表現を心がけ、接続詞を使って論理的に説明しましょう。
Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it hard to follow them, and creating a list requires careful planning and thought.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答は個人的な好みを述べていますが、曖昧な言葉(umm)があり、理由の説明がやや漠然としています。具体的な理由を簡潔に述べ、自然な表現を使いましょう。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because it's easier to organize and personalize them, which helps me stay motivated.
× because it's a very tiring for me
✓ because it's very tiring for me
The article 'a' is incorrectly used before the adjective 'tiring'. 'Tiring' is an adjective and does not require an article. The phrase should be 'very tiring' without 'a'.