List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了基本意思，但句子结构不够自然，且有些语法错误。建议简化句子，避免重复，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I usually make a list when I plan to buy many items, like for a BBQ. However, if I only need one or two things, I don't bother making a list.

Gợi ý: 回答中时态和语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确时态，简洁表达观点，并用连接词组织句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists at work because they help me remember important tasks in order of priority. This method saves me time and keeps me organized.

Gợi ý: 回答中有很多犹豫词和语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议减少填充词，使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they find it troublesome and time-consuming, which makes the process feel difficult for them.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和犹豫词，表达不够自然。建议简洁表达观点，避免重复，并使用连接词增强逻辑性。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, so it's convenient to add items anytime I need.

× It depends on what kinds of shop.

✓ It depends on what kind of shop.

这里的'shop'是单数形式，前面的'kinds of'表示复数，应该改为'singular'形式的'kind of'，表示一种类型。

× But if I will buy a lot of things, such as I will go buy something for BBQ, maybe I will make a list because it's difficult.

✓ But if I buy a lot of things, such as when I go to buy something for BBQ, maybe I will make a list because it's difficult.

条件句中一般从句不使用将来时，应该用一般现在时表示将来条件。

× Yes I will make a list when I was work because it's it will help my memory the things what's what is the most important and 2nd and 3rd and yes it was work.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I work because it helps my memory of what is the most important, second, and third, and yes, it works.

这里描述习惯动作，应该用一般现在时，'was work'错误，应为'when I work'，'it will help'改为'it helps'，'it was work'改为'it works'。

× because it's it will help my memory the things what's what is the most important and 2nd and 3rd

✓ because it helps my memory of what is the most important, second, and third

句中重复使用'it'，且结构混乱，应简化为'it helps my memory of...'，使句子通顺。

× and yes it was work.

✓ and yes, it works.

'was work'结构错误，应为'it works'表示有效。

× I think some people don't like making lists, probably because, and it's uh, it will make them feel a little trouble and difficult.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists, probably because it makes them feel a little troubled and that it's difficult.

'feel a little trouble'表达错误，应为'feel a little troubled'，且句子结构需调整使其更通顺。

× so they don't like to make list.

✓ so they don't like to make lists.

'list'应为复数形式，因为前文指的是一般的列表，不是特指一个。

× I like to make a list, use my phone, umm, because every day I will take my phone with me, so it's very convenient whenever I want to list some something or MMM.

✓ I like to make a list using my phone because I take my phone with me every day, so it's very convenient whenever I want to list something.

'make a list, use my phone'表达不连贯，应改为'make a list using my phone'，'list some something or MMM'不正确，应为'list something'。