Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Most of the time yes, especially if I have a pre planned shopping spree. I definitely do it. However sometimes it is also spontaneous. For example if I went to a certain place and I remember and around that I've got to run then definitely it is just spot on purchase.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
For work, definitely a big yes. Because I like to organize my work. I I make sure that I have a structured plan for every day. It helps me perform better and also effectively. Further, it helps avoid any kind of confusion.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I believe some people are more spontaneous and like to do things without planning. I am definitely not that type of person, but for them maybe that they have a good memory. For example, my mother never uses a list. However, she also never misses an item.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Earlier I remember there used to be a paper for every time I wanted to make a note. I example I remember using sticky notes. Although now there is my app called Note Application on my phone that I use for my everyday tasks.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences more coherent and concise, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, clarify your examples with more specific details.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping, especially if I plan a big shopping trip. However, sometimes I buy things spontaneously if I happen to be near a store and remember I need something. For instance, last week I bought a book unexpectedly when I passed by a bookstore.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but could be improved by combining short sentences and using linking words to enhance fluency. Also, provide more specific examples of how the list helps your work performance.
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because I like to stay organized. Having a structured plan each day helps me work more efficiently and avoid confusion. For example, by following my list, I can prioritize tasks and meet deadlines more easily.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, explain your example more clearly to support your point.
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and do not like planning. They might also have a good memory, which helps them remember tasks without writing them down. For instance, my mother never makes lists, yet she always remembers everything she needs.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to organize your ideas more logically and use linking words. Also, avoid repetition and be more specific about your current preference.
Ví dụ: In the past, I used to write notes on paper, such as sticky notes. However, now I prefer using a note-taking app on my phone because it is more convenient and helps me keep all my tasks organized in one place.
× For example if I went to a certain place and I remember and around that I've got to run then definitely it is just spot on purchase.
✓ For example, if I go to a certain place and I remember that I've got to run around there, then definitely it is just a spot-on purchase.
The sentence mixes past tense 'went' with present tense 'remember' and 'have got'. To maintain consistency and match the context of a habitual or general situation, the present tense 'go' should be used instead of 'went'. Also, the sentence structure was unclear and needed rephrasing for clarity.
× For example if I went to a certain place and I remember and around that I've got to run then definitely it is just spot on purchase.
✓ For example, if I go to a certain place and I remember that I've got to run around there, then definitely it is just a spot-on purchase.
The phrase 'and around that I've got to run' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'run around there' to indicate moving in the area. Also, 'spot on purchase' needs a hyphen to form the compound adjective 'spot-on'.
× I I make sure that I have a structured plan for every day.
✓ I make sure that I have a structured plan for every day.
The repetition of the pronoun 'I' is a typographical error and should be corrected by removing the duplicate.
× Earlier I remember there used to be a paper for every time I wanted to make a note.
✓ Earlier, I remember there used to be paper every time I wanted to make a note.
The phrase 'a paper' is incorrect because 'paper' in this context is uncountable and does not need an article. Also, 'for every time' is better expressed as 'every time' without 'for'.
× I example I remember using sticky notes.
✓ For example, I remember using sticky notes.
The sentence is missing the introductory phrase 'For' before 'example' to form the correct expression 'For example'. This correction improves sentence structure and clarity.