List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的答案表达了意思，但语言不够自然，句子结构混乱，有时语法错误（例如时态和代词使用），信息也冗长且不够连贯。建议：1) 先用一句简洁的主题句直接回答问题（Yes/No + 简要理由）。2) 用1–2句具体支持理由，使用连接词如 because / so / therefore 来保持逻辑。3) 注意时态与代词（例如 use present simple: I usually / I don't）。4) 控制在最多5句内。

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a shopping list because I buy most things online on Taobao. When I need something I just search and order it, which is quicker than going to the store. Making a paper list feels unnecessary and time-consuming for me.

Gợi ý: 回答内容明确，但句子有语法和布局问题（例如混用时态和多余词）。建议：1) 开头直接回答并给出原因（Yes, I do）。2) 用连接词（because / so / therefore）把支持细节连接起来。3) 更具体说明“workshops”或“crucial works”的类型或举例，提高内容具体性。4) 保持句子简洁，避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do make lists for important work tasks because they help me avoid forgetting anything. For example, before a workshop I list the materials and steps, and I check items off as I complete them, which keeps me organized and reduces stress.

Gợi ý: 回答试图解释原因，但表达不清晰且有语法错误，句子末尾不完整。建议：1) 开始时用一句明确的观点（Because / I think）。2) 提供2个具体原因并用连接词分开（for example, because... and because...）。3) 给出简短例子或结果来支持观点。4) 检查句子完整性，避免残句。

Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they have a fixed daily routine and can remember tasks easily. For example, someone who follows the same morning schedule may not need a list, and they find lists unnecessary or time-consuming.

Gợi ý: 意思基本明确，但用词不当与句子结构问题较多（例如 'condensing' 用法不正确，重复单词，语法错误）。建议：1) 直接表明偏好（I prefer ...），并说明具体情境（daily routine / shopping）。2) 用清晰的连接词解释理由（because / so）。3) 提供一个具体的例子说明如何使用纸或手机。4) 注意句子简洁与正确的动词形式。

Ví dụ: I prefer writing short daily lists on paper because I can tick off items as I complete them, which feels more satisfying. For larger or recurring tasks I use my phone so I can set reminders and access the list anywhere.

× Will I really make a list when I'm shopping as whenever I wanted to buy something I will just click Taobao and buy them in the charts instead of make a list and go physical shopping.

✓ I don't really make a list when I'm shopping, because whenever I want to buy something I just click Taobao and buy it online instead of making a list and going shopping in person.

句子中有多处时态和句式不当：使用了疑问助动词“Will I”但句意是陈述，应该用现在时表达习惯（I don't really make... / I just click）。此外“whenever I wanted”混用了过去时，应为现在时“whenever I want”；“buy them in the charts”不通，推测想说“buy it online”或“buy them online”；“instead of make a list”后接动名词，应为“instead of making a list”。建议使用简单现在时表达习惯动作，并用动名词形式在instead of之后。

× Will I did make a list for crucial works workshops as this can prevent me from forgetting them and it is very convenient for me to recheck the things I have done or not.

✓ I do make a list for important work or workshops because this can prevent me from forgetting things and it's very convenient for me to check whether I have done them.

句子中错误使用了“Will I did”——混合了疑问助动词、过去式和陈述语序，语法不正确。原意是陈述现在的习惯，应使用简单现在时“I do make”。此外“crucial works workshops”搭配混乱，改为“important work or workshops”更自然；“recheck the things I have done or not”更通顺的表达是“check whether I have done them”。建议使用正确的时态（简单现在）并改正词组搭配与从句结构。

× Where I think most people do not need to make a list to remember something or not, they just have a linear routine to do and finish them and they will not leave anything left behind and.

✓ I think most people don't need to make a list to remember things; they just follow a routine and finish tasks, so they don't leave anything unfinished.

句子结构混乱：开头用Where不合适，应直接用“I think”；“to remember something or not”冗余，应简化为“to remember things”；“have a linear routine to do and finish them”不自然，改为“follow a routine and finish tasks”；句尾多余“and”且存在重复意义“not leave anything left behind”可简化为“don't leave anything unfinished”。建议去掉多余连词，调整语序，使句子简洁明了。

× Well that depends on what condensing this is about. For the daily routine I will write it on the paper to prevent I will forget and when I finish them I will mark the the blank to meaning that I have done it before.

✓ Well, that depends on what the list is for. For my daily routine I write it on paper so I won't forget, and when I finish a task I tick the box to show that I've done it.

原句时态和表达不当：“depends on what condensing this is about”不通，应该说“depends on what the list is for”；“I will write it on the paper”习惯性动作应使用一般现在时“I write”；“to prevent I will forget”语序和用法错误，改为“so I won't forget”；“mark the the blank to meaning that I have done it before”不自然，应为“tick the box to show that I've done it”。建议根据语境用一般现在时描述习惯行为，并使用正确的固定搭配（tick the box, show that）。

× instead of make a list and go physical shopping.

✓ instead of making a list and going shopping in person.

在英语中，介词短语或短语替代结构中使用instead of后应接动名词（-ing形式），因此不能用不定式或原形动词。把“make”改为“making”，“go physical shopping”亦不自然，改为“going shopping in person”。