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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, I usually have a list in hand when shopping. If I go to buy many things it's easy to forgot something, so I usually have a list in mind or in the smartphone so I can check out all I want to buy.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I usually have a list for my work. For my work for some urgent I need to I need to soften them first and sometimes I can't finish all the list on it, so I need to work overtime.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Well, I think some people don't like making list because they can consult with the relevant person or customers targeted and if they have some documentary to handle they can do them in the office.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to have a list on my phone so I can add it and take it once I have any change anytime.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰,直接回应了问题并给出原因,但存在语法错误(forgot → forget)、冗余(“in mind or in the smartphone”重复表达)和句子衔接可以更自然。建议简化句子,使用正确时态和更自然的连接词,并保持不超过5句。具体可练习用一到两句表达习惯,再用一两句补充原因或细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list. When I have many items to buy, I often forget things, so I keep the list on my phone to check everything off as I go.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容模糊且有多处语法和表达错误(例如“for some urgent I need to I need to soften them”不通顺,缺少连贯性),信息不够具体。建议先用一句话直接回答是否做清单,再说明效果或问题,用明确原因和例子。注意语法(时态、主谓一致)和词汇选择(urgent tasks, prioritise, postpone)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a work list every day, but it doesn't always work perfectly. When urgent tasks come up I have to prioritise them, so I sometimes postpone other items and end up working overtime.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答尝试给出理由,但表达不够具体且逻辑混乱(“consult with the relevant person or customers targeted”与“documentary to handle”用词不当)。建议用更自然明确的原因,比如觉得麻烦、偏好记忆或相信随时沟通更灵活,并用一两个具体例子或情境支持观点。

Ví dụ: I think some people find lists unnecessary or time-consuming. For example, they prefer to ask colleagues or customers directly for updates, or they handle tasks as they come rather than planning everything in advance.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答清楚表达了偏好,但句子有小错误(“take it once I have any change”不自然)和冗余。建议用更地道的表达说明原因,例如方便修改、携带和设置提醒,并补充一两个具体功能(sync, checklist)。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easy to add or remove items and I can sync it across devices or set reminders.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× If I go to buy many things it's easy to forgot something, so I usually have a list in mind or in the smartphone so I can check out all I want to buy.

If I go to buy many things it's easy to forget something, so I usually have a list in mind or on my smartphone so I can check everything I want to buy.

错误类型:动词不定式/动词过去式混淆(应使用动词原形或不定式)。句中 'forgot' 是过去式,但需要现在时的不定式或动词原形 'forget'。另外,习惯搭配为 'on my smartphone' 而不是 'in the smartphone',且 'check out all I want to buy' 更自然的表达是 'check everything I want to buy'。建议注意动词时态的一致性和固定搭配:'easy to + 动词原形',设备常用介词为 'on'。

Sentence structure errors

× For my work for some urgent I need to I need to soften them first and sometimes I can't finish all the list on it, so I need to work overtime.

For my work, for some urgent tasks I need to sort them first, and sometimes I can't finish everything on the list, so I need to work overtime.

错误类型:句子结构混乱,词语使用不当。原句有重复 'I need to','for some urgent' 需要名词搭配(如 'urgent tasks'),'soften' 用错,应该是 'sort'(整理)。'all the list on it' 用法不当,应为 'everything on the list'。建议先理清要表达的意思(强调紧急任务需先处理),用清晰的短语连接句子并避免重复。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Well, I think some people don't like making list because they can consult with the relevant person or customers targeted and if they have some documentary to handle they can do them in the office.

Well, I think some people don't like making lists because they can consult with the relevant person or targeted customers and if they have some documents to handle they can do them in the office.

错误类型:量词和名词形式使用错误。'making list' 应为复数 'making lists';'customers targeted' 词序不当,应为 'targeted customers';'documentary' 用错,表示文件应使用 'documents'。另外需保持名词和动词的一致性。建议使用正确的复数形式和常见搭配:'make lists'、'targeted customers'、'documents'。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer to have a list on my phone so I can add it and take it once I have any change anytime.

I prefer to have a list on my phone so I can add to it and access it whenever I have any changes.

错误类型:介词使用不当和表达不自然。原句 'add it' 应为 'add to it'(向列表中添加内容);'take it' 在此语境不恰当,意为访问或查看应使用 'access it' 或 'view it';'once I have any change anytime' 表达重复且不自然,应为 'whenever I have any changes'。建议注意固定搭配 'add to sth.' 和用更自然的动词如 'access',以及避免重复时间短语。

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I usually have a list in hand when shopping.

Yes, I usually have a list in hand when shopping.

错误类型:单复数问题检查。此句实际上正确,'a list' 与语境匹配,无需改动。保留原句。

There be issue

× If I go to buy many things it's easy to forgot something, so I usually have a list in mind or in the smartphone so I can check out all I want to buy.

If I go to buy many things it's easy to forget something, so I usually have a list in mind or on my smartphone so I can check everything I want to buy.

错误类型:'There be' 问题检查。该句没有 'there is/are' 结构错误,但包含其他错误(见上文修正),因此不需要 'there be' 特定修改。

Third person singular issue

× Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

错误类型:第三人称单数问题检查。句子为询问,语法正确,'Does it work?' 用法无误,无需修改。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

EasyUncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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