List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Bạn nên: 1) Trả lời trực tiếp, ngắn gọn ở câu đầu (topic sentence). 2) Sử dụng câu rõ ràng, ngữ pháp đúng (ví dụ: "it will help me save time" thay vì "it's will make me save time"). 3) Tránh lặp từ và tiếng ậm ừ (uh, umm). 4) Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể làm bằng chứng (ví dụ: viết ra số lượng món hoặc theo khu vực cửa hàng). 5) Giữ tổng số câu không quá 5 câu.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save time. For example, I divide the list by supermarket sections so I can move quickly from produce to dairy. This reduces impulse buys and usually means I finish shopping in under 20 minutes.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên: 1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (Yes/No + reason). 2) Sử dụng thì và danh từ đúng ("every day", "it helps me stay organized"). 3) Tránh lỗi từ vựng không phù hợp ("importance tax and unsold" không rõ nghĩa) — thay bằng các mục cụ thể như "important tasks" hoặc "deadlines". 4) Dùng liên từ để nối ý (e.g., "so", "because", "for example"). 5) Giảm tiếng ậm ừ và sửa ngữ pháp để câu mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a short to-do list every day because it helps me stay organized and focus on priorities. For example, I list three main tasks and their deadlines each morning, which prevents me from forgetting important deadlines and improves my productivity.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên: 1) Trả lời trực tiếp với một hoặc hai lý do rõ ràng và ngắn gọn. 2) Dùng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác (ví dụ: "They think it takes too much time" hoặc "They are too lazy"). 3) Bổ sung một ví dụ hoặc giải thích ngắn để làm rõ lý do. 4) Tránh cấu trúc lộn xộn và lặp từ.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time. Others simply prefer a more spontaneous approach; for instance, they feel lists limit their flexibility and creativity.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên: 1) Trả lời rõ ràng: chọn "paper" hoặc "phone" và giải thích lý do chính. 2) Sử dụng từ chính xác ("I prefer paper" instead of "I refer to the farmer"). 3) Cung cấp lý do cụ thể và ngắn gọn (ví dụ: dễ đọc, viết tay giúp nhớ lâu hơn). 4) Tránh nói lan man và tiếng ậm ừ, dùng một ví dụ để minh họa.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because handwriting helps me remember items better and it's easier to glance at. For example, I stick a written list on the fridge so I can check items as I move around the kitchen.

× I always make a list when I go to the shop, mainly because it's will make me save time, uh, and uh, save a lot of time, uh, to go there and just buy anything I need and don't waste time to think about what we need.

✓ I always make a list when I go to the shop, mainly because it will help me save time and stop me from wasting time deciding what I need.

Incorrect use of contraction and modal with subject: 'it's will' is ungrammatical. Use 'it will' or 'it'll'. Also 'make me save time' is awkward — use 'help me save time' and 'don't waste time to think' should be 'stop me from wasting time deciding'. Suggestions: replace 'it's will' with 'it will' and use natural verbs like 'help' and 'stop ... from + -ing' to express purpose and prevention.

× I make a list every days, uh, when I start to work, I always write a short list to do umm, in the beginning, uh, to starting work because it's have me organize and ensure I don't forget the importance tax and unsold make me, uh, follow the, uh, productivities.

✓ I make a list every day when I start work; I always write a short to-do list at the beginning because it helps me organize and ensure I don't forget important tasks and follow my productivity plan.

Several errors including plural 'days' should be singular 'day' with 'every'. 'To do' list should be 'to-do list'. 'to starting work' is incorrect; use 'at the beginning' or 'when starting work'. 'it's have me' is wrong — use 'it helps me' (third-person singular). 'importance tax and unsold' are unclear; likely meant 'important tasks and unsold items' or 'important tasks'. Suggestions: use correct singular/plural forms and standard phrases like 'help(s) me', 'to-do list', 'important tasks', and reorganize sentence for clarity.

× Hi thing that'll be is take a lot of take a lot of time or they so lazy for do this.

✓ I think that's because it takes a lot of time or they are too lazy to do it.

Multiple structure problems: 'Hi thing that'll be' seems to be 'I think that's because'. 'take a lot of take a lot of time' is repetitive; correct verb form with subject 'it takes'. 'they so lazy for do this' should be 'they are too lazy to do it'. Suggestions: use 'I think that's because', ensure subject-verb agreement ('it takes'), use 'too... to' for inability/reluctance, and avoid repetition.

× I think I refer to the farmer mainly because I think right on paper make me feel easier and comfortable than on the phone.

✓ I think I prefer paper mainly because writing on paper makes me feel more relaxed and comfortable than using my phone.

Several errors: 'refer to the farmer' is incorrect — likely 'prefer paper'. 'right on paper' should be 'writing on paper'. 'make me feel easier' is ungrammatical; use 'makes me feel more relaxed' or 'more comfortable'. Also 'than on the phone' better as 'than using my phone'. Suggestions: choose correct verbs ('prefer'), correct gerund form ('writing'), and natural adjectives ('relaxed', 'comfortable'), and correct prepositional phrases ('on the phone' vs 'using my phone').

× You know, uh, if you depend on your phone too much, it's not good, right?

✓ You know, if you depend on your phone too much, it's not good, right?

Original sentence is acceptable but contains filler 'uh' which should be removed for written grammar. Modal usage is fine; keep conditional structure 'if you depend... it's not good'. Suggestion: remove fillers for clarity in written form.