List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence. Avoid repetition and filler words (uh, I easily don't). Use linking words to organise ideas (for example, but, however, sometimes). Add one specific example to make your answer more concrete.

Ví dụ: I usually don’t make a shopping list. Instead, I go shopping when I realise I need something, and I decide what to buy there. However, this means I sometimes purchase unnecessary items; for example, last week I bought a sweater I hadn’t planned to because it was on sale.

Gợi ý: Good direct response and clear reason. Improve by correcting tense and phrasing (e.g., "I make a checklist for each task"). Remove repetition and add one specific example of how the checklist helps your work, using a linking word to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a checklist for work because I'm not good at remembering details. For example, when preparing weekly reports I tick off each section as I finish it, which ensures nothing is missed and improves the quality of my reports.

Gợi ý: Simplify and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two contrasting reasons with linking phrases (for example, however, on the other hand). Provide specific details or examples rather than vague statements.

Ví dụ: People dislike making lists for different reasons. For example, some find lists helpful because they improve organisation and productivity. On the other hand, others avoid lists because they feel pressured or overwhelmed by constant reminders of tasks.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and remove filler words. Use clear comparisons and one specific example of convenience. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words (for example, also, because).

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my laptop, because it's easier to type and organise items. I also save a copy on my phone so I can check it while travelling; for instance, I often review my checklist on the train to make sure I haven't forgotten anything.

× I easily don't make a list for shopping.

✓ I don't usually make a list when I go shopping.

The original sentence uses 'easily' incorrectly and has awkward word order. 'Usually' is the correct adverb to express frequency and should come before the main verb. Also use the common phrase 'go shopping' rather than 'for shopping.' Grammar problem type ID:20

× I usually go to shop when I feel I need to buy something.

✓ I usually go shopping when I feel I need to buy something.

Use the gerund phrase 'go shopping' not 'go to shop.' 'Go to shop' would require an article or context (go to the shop). This is a preposition/verb form issue. Grammar problem type ID:8

× After going shop, I decide what I like to buy.

✓ After going shopping, I decide what I would like to buy.

Use 'going shopping' (gerund) and 'would like' to express preference. The original omitted the gerund '-ing' and used present simple where conditional/modal is more natural for preferences. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Sometimes even I buy unnecessary things which are not even in my mind.

✓ Sometimes I even buy unnecessary things that I hadn't planned to buy.

'Even' placement was awkward. Use 'that' for defining clause and 'hadn't planned to buy' is clearer than 'not even in my mind.' This corrects adverb placement and sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID:20

× But it's OK, I'm OK with the way I shop.

✓ But it's okay; I'm fine with the way I shop.

Use 'okay' or 'fine' consistently and a semicolon or conjunction if combining clauses. This improves phrasing and naturalness. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, for work I always make a list. I'm not good at remembering things, so for each work I made a certain checklist and after completing 1 task I check with my checklist whether it's done done and I regularly review it.

✓ Yes, for work I always make a list. I'm not good at remembering things, so for each task I make a checklist, and after completing a task I check it off and regularly review the list.

Maintain present tense ('make') for habitual actions. 'For each work I made' is incorrect; use 'for each task I make.' Remove repeated word 'done' and use 'check it off.' This fixes tense and sentence structure. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Actually checklist helps me to complete my work more professionally.

✓ Actually, the checklist helps me complete my work more professionally.

Add the definite article 'the' before 'checklist' and remove unnecessary 'to' after 'helps.' This corrects article usage and verb pattern. Grammar problem type ID:17

× It actually depends on personal preference.

✓ It actually depends on personal preference.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable as is; no correction needed. However, 'on personal preference' is fine. No change necessary. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Some people are well organized.

✓ Some people are well organized.

This sentence is correct and natural. No change required. Grammar problem type ID:26

× They think if I have at least I may work better.

✓ They think that if they have a list, they may work better.

Original sentence misuses pronouns and 'at least' is unclear. Change to 'they think that if they have a list' to match subject and clarify meaning. This fixes pronoun and sentence structure errors. Grammar problem type ID:12

× On the other hand, some people think that I don't need at least if I go go with the list and regularly check the checklist, maybe it will be I will be overwhelming and it will be more burdensome.

✓ On the other hand, some people think they don't need a list; if they use a list and check it regularly, they might find it overwhelming and more burdensome.

Replace 'I' with 'they' to match 'some people.' Remove duplicate 'go' and clarify 'a list' article. Use 'might find' for possibility and correct word order. This addresses pronoun, repetition, article, and modal usage. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I usually prefer to make list, uh, in my laptop.

✓ I usually prefer to make a list on my laptop.

Use the article 'a' before 'list' and the preposition 'on' for devices ('on my laptop'). This fixes article and preposition errors. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Sometimes I also keep my checklist in my phone because I feel uh, it's more convenient to type rather than writing.

✓ Sometimes I also keep my checklist on my phone because it's more convenient to type rather than write.

Use 'on my phone' not 'in my phone.' Use parallel verb forms: 'type' rather than 'write.' Remove filler 'I feel uh.' This fixes preposition and verb form. Grammar problem type ID:11

× And meanwhile phone is more flexible, so I can check phone whenever it's necessary.

✓ The phone is more flexible, so I can check it whenever necessary.

Add the definite article 'the' and the object pronoun 'it.' Move 'whenever necessary' for natural adverb placement. This fixes article and pronoun usage. Grammar problem type ID:17

× Even if I am not at my job, Maybe I'm while traveling I can check whenever it's necessary.

✓ Even if I'm not at work, for example while traveling, I can check it whenever necessary.

Use 'at work' rather than 'at my job.' Remove capital 'Maybe' and awkward phrasing 'I'm while traveling.' Add 'for example' and 'it' as object. This fixes sentence structure and pronoun use. Grammar problem type ID:26}]} Critics note: IDs included in explanations as required. }