List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Keep your answer concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Reduce repetition and correct tense/grammar errors (e.g., "I tell them" not "I told tell them"). Use linking words like "however" or "sometimes" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I usually don't make a shopping list myself. However, when my father goes shopping I sometimes write a list for him so he knows what my family needs. This helps us avoid forgetting items like milk or bread.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct answer, then explain briefly with one or two clear reasons. Avoid filler and repeated words (e.g., "make a make a list"). Use simple cause-effect linking words like "because" or "so" and correct phrasing (e.g., "I don't follow a strict routine").

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a work list because I find that strict routines don't suit me. Because my priorities change during the day, a fixed list often becomes useless, so I prefer to handle tasks flexibly.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and provide a clear reason with a concise example. Avoid hesitations and unclear phrases (e.g., "end up eat unused"). Use linking words such as "because" and "instead" correctly and give a specific consequence or example.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike lists because they find them inflexible. For example, if priorities change during the day, a list can become irrelevant, so these people prefer a flexible schedule that lets them respond to urgent tasks.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct preference and then give one clear reason or condition. Fix grammar and vocabulary errors (e.g., "write it on paper", "at home"). Use a linking phrase like "if" to show the condition and be concise.

Ví dụ: It depends on where I am. If I'm at school I write my list on paper because phones are not allowed, but at home I prefer to make lists on my phone since it's more convenient and I can edit them easily.

× Actually I don't make a list when I shop, but when my father goes to shop or my mother goes to shop then I told tell them what to bring and when my father sometimes goes to shop I make a list for him to buy these things that I want and my mother wants.

✓ Actually I don't make a list when I shop, but when my father or my mother goes shopping I tell them what to bring, and when my father sometimes goes shopping I make a list for him of the things my mother and I want.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'goes to shop' should be 'goes shopping' (verb + -ing form for activity), extra words 'told tell' and incorrect tense/word order. Suggestion: use 'goes shopping' for the activity, use simple present 'tell' to report habitual actions, and compress 'the things that I want and my mother wants' to 'the things my mother and I want'.

× Actually I don't make a list for my work 'cause when I try to make a make a list it doesn't work really because I don't work according to my rules and privileges so it cannot work.

✓ Actually I don't make a list for my work because when I try to make a list it doesn't really work, because I don't follow rules or a strict routine, so it doesn't work for me.

Errors: repeated phrase 'make a make a list', wrong adverb placement 'doesn't work really', and awkward phrase 'according to my rules and privileges'. Suggestion: remove repetition, place adverb 'really' before 'work' or use 'doesn't really work', and use 'follow rules or a routine' for clarity.

× So I don't really don't like to make a routine or list for my work.

✓ So I really don't like to make a routine or a list for my work.

Errors: double negation 'don't really don't' is incorrect. Suggestion: use single negative 'don't' and position 'really' before 'don't' or after the auxiliary as in corrected sentence.

× Actually, I think some people don't like making this because uh, they are not effective for them like myself, because when I try to make a routine, I end up eat unused.

✓ Actually, I think some people don't like making lists because they are not effective for them, like me; when I try to make a routine, I end up not using it.

Errors: 'making this' unclear — use 'lists'; 'are not effective for them like myself' should be 'are not effective for them, like me'; 'end up eat unused' is ungrammatical — correct form 'end up not using it'. Suggestion: use 'end up not using it' to express failure to use a routine and use 'like me' for comparison.

× Instead. I think that I prefer to keep a flexible schedule and deal with tasks as priorities changes.

✓ Instead, I prefer to keep a flexible schedule and deal with tasks as priorities change.

Errors: sentence fragment 'Instead.' should be connected; 'I think that I prefer' is wordy — simple present 'I prefer' is better; subject-verb agreement 'priorities changes' should be 'priorities change'. Suggestion: use 'priorities change' and concise phrasing.

× So I think that some people don't like this, like me.

✓ So I think that some people don't like this, as I don't.

Errors: 'like me' is informal and ambiguous. Suggestion: use 'as I don't' or 'like me' can be acceptable in speech but written correction provides clearer parallelism.

× Actually that depends on which place you are in because if you are in school, so we cannot bring mobiles to the that place.

✓ Actually that depends on where you are, because if you are at school we cannot bring mobile phones to that place.

Errors: 'which place you are in' is awkward — use 'where you are'; 'in school' vs 'at school' — 'at school' is correct here; 'bring mobiles to the that place' has extra 'the' and wrong word order. Suggestion: use 'mobile phones' and 'to that place' or simply 'we cannot bring mobile phones.'

× So I think that if I am in school then I will write the eight on paper.

✓ So I think that if I am at school then I will write it on paper.

Errors: 'the eight' is likely a mistyped pronoun; use 'it' to refer to the list. Also 'at school' is preferred. Suggestion: confirm referent and use 'write it on paper.'

× If I I were in home then I will write in in my on my phone and I will take this to.

✓ If I were at home then I would write it on my phone and take it with me.

Errors: mixed conditional forms 'If I were... I will' is inconsistent; 'in home' should be 'at home'; repeated words 'in in my on my phone' and awkward 'take this to.' Suggestion: use second conditional 'If I were at home, I would...' if hypothetical, or use present real 'If I am at home, I will...' depending on intended meaning. Use 'write it on my phone and take it with me.'