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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go. It helps me buy what I need and save time. For example, I often group items by category on my phone so I don't wander around the store.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go. It helps me avoid impulsory purchases and stick to my budget. For example, when I go to supermarket, I find my list so I can buy what I need quickly and save both money and time.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Some people don't like making shopping lists because they feel it's unnecessary and a waste of time. For example, they might prefer to rely on their memory and enjoy shopping spontaneously.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer making shopping lists on my phone because it's more convenient and flexible. I can add items wherever and whenever I remember them, and apps help me keep track of what I have so I don't buy duplicates.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 86.0

Gợi ý: 总体很好:回答直接、内容相关且有具体例子,句子简洁自然。但可在连贯性上再加强,使用更多连接词或短语(例如:also, because, which means)使逻辑更清晰;此外可加入一两处更具体的细节(例如常用的分类或常买的物品),以提高内容丰富度与词汇多样性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go because it helps me save time and avoid forgetting things. Also, I group items by category on my phone—produce, dairy and cleaning supplies—so I can move through the store quickly and not wander around.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答存在问题:未直接回应“为工作做清单吗?”而是重复了购物清单内容,导致偏题。还有少量语言错误(例如:'impulsory'应为'impulsive',冠词和介词使用需改进)。建议先直接回答工作相关问题(是/否),然后说明工作清单如何发挥作用并给出具体例子(例如使用任务管理工具、优先级排序)。同时注意用词准确和句子多样化。

Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my work, and they help me stay organized. For instance, I use a task app to list daily tasks by priority, which means I finish urgent reports first and avoid missing deadlines.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答切题且简洁明确,有原因和例子。但可通过增加连接词(for example 改为moreover 或 because)和更具体的细节(例如哪些人群更倾向于不用清单,或这种方式的优缺点)来丰富内容。此外可尝试使用替换词汇避免重复(例如:unnecessary → redundant)。

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they find them redundant and time-consuming; moreover, many prefer to rely on memory and enjoy the spontaneity of browsing, which feels more relaxing to them.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 90.0

Gợi ý: 回答非常好:直接、清晰且包含具体理由与例子。要想更进一步,可以加入一短句比较纸质清单的优缺点以展示更全面的观点,或使用少量更高级词汇(例如: 'synchronise', 'cloud-based').

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and flexible; I can add items anytime and sync them across devices, and shopping apps help me track what I already have so I avoid buying duplicates.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect word form / spelling (treated as Verb + -ing form or adjective error)

× It helps me avoid impulsory purchases and stick to my budget.

It helps me avoid impulsive purchases and stick to my budget.

错误类型对应:13(Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs)或8(Verb + -ing form)——这里单词拼写和词性错误。原句中“impulsory”不是正确的英语单词,正确形容词应为“impulsive”,意为“冲动的”。建议记住常见形容词后缀如“-ive”,并在不确定时查词典或使用常见搭配(avoid + noun,avoid impulsive purchases)。

Incorrect use of article / preposition

× For example, when I go to supermarket, I find my list so I can buy what I need quickly and save both money and time.

For example, when I go to the supermarket, I find my list so I can buy what I need quickly and save both money and time.

错误类型对应:17(Incorrect use of the definite article)或11(Incorrect use of prepositions)。在英语中,名词“supermarket”前通常需要定冠词“the”表示特指某个或一般类的超市。建议记住常见场景下可数名词单数前需要冠词(a/an/the)或复数/不可数形式。

Word choice / verb form order (minor naturalness issue)

× I can add items wherever and whenever I remember them, and apps help me keep track of what I have so I don't buy duplicates.

I can add items wherever and whenever I remember them, and apps help me keep track of what I have so I don't buy duplicate items.

错误类型对应:13(Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs)或26(Sentence structure errors)。原句中“buy duplicates”虽然可被理解,但更自然的说法是“buy duplicate items”或“buy duplicates of items”。建议在名词前补上名词或改用合适的搭配,使表达更清晰。

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