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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, I actually make a shopping list before I go to store to stay organized and avoid impulse buys. For example if I'm planning meals for the week, less ingredients.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Definitely often make A to do list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks and manage time efficiently to make me more productive.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Well, I think some people don't like making this because they find the restrictive and feels feel less to limit spontaneously. I prefer a more flexible, intuitive approach to task.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I'll prefer to make a list on my phone because it's convenient and I can add it everything really fast. For example, I often rearrange shopping list when I plan to change.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 内容表达较清楚,但存在语法和用词不准确、句子连贯性不足的问题。建议:1) 将句子整理为主句加支持细节,避免碎片句;2) 修正冠词和复数形式(the store, fewer ingredients);3) 使用连接词让例子更自然(for example / when)。训练方法:每次回答先说主题句,再用一到两句具体例子并用连接词衔接。

Ví dụ: Yes. I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store to stay organized and avoid impulse buying. For example, when I plan meals for the week I write down the ingredients I need, so I end up buying fewer unnecessary items.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答意思明确但语法和句子结构需要改进。建议:1) 注意冠词和词序(I often make a to-do list);2) 使用短句分清主旨与原因;3) 添加连接词提高流畅度。练习时把原因用两到三个并列短句表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work. It helps me prioritize tasks and manage my time more efficiently, which makes me much more productive.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 表达含义模糊且语言错误较多。建议:1) 使用正确的代词和名词(making lists);2) 修正形容词和动词搭配(find them restrictive, feel it limits spontaneity);3) 最后一部分用完整句子表达个人偏好。练习把原因先概括,再用一两个具体短语解释。

Ví dụ: Well, I think some people don't like making lists because they find them restrictive and feel that lists limit their spontaneity. I personally prefer a more flexible, intuitive approach to tasks.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 66.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容合理但有语法和措辞错误。建议:1) 使用正确时态和表达(I prefer making lists on my phone);2) 修正代词和结构(add items very quickly);3) 例子用完整句并加链接词。练习把理由和例子各自用一句话表达,注意连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can add items very quickly. For example, I often rearrange my shopping list when my plans change.

Ngữ pháp

'26: Sentence structure errors'

× Yes, I actually make a shopping list before I go to store to stay organized and avoid impulse buys. For example if I'm planning meals for the week, less ingredients.

Yes, I actually make a shopping list before I go to the store to stay organized and avoid impulse buys. For example, if I'm planning meals for the week, I buy fewer ingredients.

句子结构与表达问题:原句缺少定冠词“the”,并且第二句结构不完整,主语和谓语缺失。应在“go to store”前加“the”,并将第二句改为完整句子“if I'm planning meals for the week, I buy fewer ingredients”。同时使用“fewer”替代“less”用于可数名词“ingredients”。建议多注意句子主谓完整性和名词的可数/不可数用法。

'27: Subject-verb agreement errors'

× Definitely often make A to do list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks and manage time efficiently to make me more productive.

I definitely often make a to-do list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks and manage my time efficiently and makes me more productive.

主谓一致与句子结构问题:原句缺主语“I”和大小写及连字符错误(A to do list应为 a to-do list)。此外“to make me more productive”位置不当,改为“and makes me more productive”与主句谓语保持一致。建议说话时确保有明确主语并用连字符连接复合形容词,保持动词形式一致。

'26: Sentence structure errors'

× Well, I think some people don't like making this because they find the restrictive and feels feel less to limit spontaneously. I prefer a more flexible, intuitive approach to task.

Well, I think some people don't like making lists because they find them restrictive and feel less able to act spontaneously. I prefer a more flexible, intuitive approach to tasks.

句子结构和代词用法错误:原句用“this”指代不清,应为“lists”;“find the restrictive”应为“find them restrictive”用复数代词指代lists;“feels feel less to limit spontaneously”语序混乱且动词形式错误,改为“feel less able to act spontaneously”。最后“approach to task”缺复数或限定词,应为“approach to tasks”。建议理清指代对象,保证代词与所指名词数一致,并注意固定搭配“feel able to do sth”。

'6: Present tense issue'

× I'll prefer to make a list on my phone because it's convenient and I can add it everything really fast. For example, I often rearrange shopping list when I plan to change.

I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's convenient and I can add everything really fast. For example, I often rearrange my shopping list when I plan changes.

时态和句子结构问题:使用“I'll prefer”不符合一般现在时的习惯表达,应为“I prefer”。“add it everything”语序错误,正确为“add everything”或“add items”。“rearrange shopping list”缺所有格,改为“rearrange my shopping list”,且“when I plan to change”不完整,改为“when I plan changes”。建议使用一般现在时表达习惯性喜好,注意代词位置和所有格用法。

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