Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store to set all classes and avoid in prospects. For example, if I need ingredients for the weakness, I write them down so I don't forget anything. And again, they do my pocket.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I often made our To Do List for my work because it helped me say it organized and Portugal for example, at least urgent marking and lesson penny first. It usually works well by reducing stress and ensure time meet deadline.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people dislike making less because they find the post restrictive and prefer a more personal approach to task.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer making less on my phone because it's convenient and I can access them anyway. For example, I use an old app to add item as they come to mind. However, I sometimes got quick remind on paper when I'm shopping because it's faster to glance at a physical list.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 简洁明了地回答问题并注意句子准确性与连贯性。注意词汇和短语的正确使用(例如“set all classes”、“avoid in prospects”、“ingredients for the weakness”均不合适或有误),使用连接词使细节更清晰。控制在最多5个句子内,主题句后用一两个具体例子支撑。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything. For example, if I need ingredients for a recipe, I write them down so I don't forget anything. This also saves time and prevents impulse purchases.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答应使用正确时态和更准确的词汇,保持逻辑清晰。先给出直接回答,然后用一两句说明为何有效或举例。注意连词使用和语序,避免无关或错误单词(如“Portugal”、“lesson penny”)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a to-do list for work because it keeps me organized. For example, I prioritize urgent tasks first and break large tasks into smaller steps. This usually reduces stress and helps me meet deadlines.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答需更自然并使用恰当词汇,明确表达原因并可举一两个具体方面支持论点。控制句子数量,使用连接词(because, for example)增强连贯性。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find them too restrictive and prefer a flexible approach. For example, they may enjoy deciding tasks spontaneously or feel that lists add pressure.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答总体合适,但需注意词汇和语法准确性(如“making less”、“access them anyway”、“old app”)。先陈述偏好,再说明原因并给具体例子,最后对比总结。保持句子简洁。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can access them anywhere. For example, I use a note app to add items as they come to mind. However, when I'm shopping I sometimes jot a quick paper list because it's faster to glance at.
× Yeah, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store to set all classes and avoid in prospects.
✓ Yeah, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store to set all things and avoid forgetting items.
句子结构混乱且用词不当(原句中的“set all classes”与“avoid in prospects”不是地道表达)。应保持清晰的动词短语:使用“set all things”或更好地使用“list everything”,并将“avoid forgetting items”作为目的说明。建议把句子按主语+谓语+目的状语结构清晰表达。
× For example, if I need ingredients for the weakness, I write them down so I don't forget anything.
✓ For example, if I need ingredients for a recipe, I write them down so I don't forget anything.
“for the weakness”不是恰当的名词搭配,导致句子意义不明。应根据语境使用“for a recipe”或“for a dish”。这是词语搭配错误影响句子结构,需替换为正确名词短语以保持句意。
× And again, they do my pocket.
✓ And sometimes I keep it in my pocket.
原句不符合英语句子结构且用词错误(“they do my pocket”无意义)。应使用主语+谓语+宾语结构,如“I keep it in my pocket”或“Sometimes I put it in my pocket”。建议使用常见表达“keep it in my pocket”。
× Yeah, I often made our To Do List for my work because it helped me say it organized and Portugal for example, at least urgent marking and lesson penny first.
✓ Yeah, I often make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and prioritise urgent tasks and lessons first.
时态错误与句子结构混乱:原句使用过去式“made”而上下文是一般现在习惯性动作,应用一般现在时“make”。此外“say it organized”和“Portugal”显然是错误拼写或词用,应为“stay organized”与“prioritise”或“put…first”。需修正为明确的动词短语并调整时态一致。
× It usually works well by reducing stress and ensure time meet deadline.
✓ It usually works well by reducing stress and ensuring I meet deadlines on time.
句子并列结构中动词形式不一致,“reducing”是动名词,后面应保持平行使用“ensuring”而不是不带-s的动词“ensure”。另外“ensure time meet deadline”语序和名词使用错误,需改为“ensuring I meet deadlines on time”或“ensuring deadlines are met”。
× Some people dislike making less because they find the post restrictive and prefer a more personal approach to task.
✓ Some people dislike making lists because they find them restrictive and prefer a more personal approach to tasks.
多个词语错误导致句子结构混乱:“less”应为“lists”,“post”应为“them”或“lists”,需保持代词与先行词一致;“task”需用复数“tasks”以匹配泛指多项任务。保持主谓宾一致和正确代词指代。
× I prefer making less on my phone because it's convenient and I can access them anyway.
✓ I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can access them anywhere.
时态总体可用一般现在,但句中词汇错误:“less”应为“lists”,“anyway”用法不当,应为“anywhere”(表示可以随时随地访问)。同时保持代词“them”指代“lists”。
× For example, I use an old app to add item as they come to mind.
✓ For example, I use an app to add items as they come to mind.
句子中名词单复数和冠词使用错误:应为“add items”而非“add item”,且“an old app”可以简化为“an app”或保留“an old app”视语境;同时需注意“as they come to mind”中的代词应指代“items”。
× However, I sometimes got quick remind on paper when I'm shopping because it's faster to glance at a physical list.
✓ However, I sometimes get a quick reminder on paper when I'm shopping because it's faster to glance at a physical list.
时态和词类错误:应使用一般现在时“get”表示习惯动作,而不是过去式“got”;“quick remind”需改为名词短语“a quick reminder”。保持时态一致并使用正确词类。