List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, vocabulary, and structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and use linking words to connect ideas. Also correct word choice (use "list" not "lessons") and reduce redundancy by combining similar points. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because I often forget items when I need more than three or four things. For example, if I need five or six items I sometimes miss one or two, so writing them down helps me remember. As a result, shopping is faster and I avoid returning to the store.

Gợi ý: Make a clear direct answer first, then give concise supporting reasons with correct word choices and linking words. Replace "lessons" with "lists," fix grammar (e.g., "things interfering with each other"), and avoid vague phrases like "prefer to make less." Aim for 2–3 supporting sentences with examples of how lists help your work.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I use work lists to stay organised and ensure tasks don’t interfere with each other. For example, I prioritise urgent tasks at the top of the list so I complete them first, which makes my workflow more efficient.

Gợi ý: Clarify the idea and correct word choice and grammar. State the main reason directly, then give one or two specific supporting reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "for example"). Avoid double negatives and unnecessary repetitions.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they trust their memory and feel it’s unnecessary. For example, people who remember appointments easily or who prefer a flexible approach may find lists restrictive.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference statement, then provide concise, specific reasons with linking words. Correct word choice ("lists"), reduce repetition, and include one concrete example of phone convenience (e.g., reminders, access anywhere). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it’s more convenient and I can access them anywhere. For example, phone apps send reminders and I don’t worry about losing a paper note, which saves time and reduces mistakes.

× Yes, I make lessons for the things I want to buy before actually going to the shop because I tend to forget whenever the things I want to buy exceeded the five or six items, and I tend to drop one or two. But if I want to buy two to three items, I usually remember them, but more than that I tend.

✓ Yes, I make lists of the things I want to buy before actually going to the shop because I tend to forget whenever the things I want to buy exceed five or six items, and I tend to drop one or two. But if I want to buy two or three items, I usually remember them; with more than that I tend to forget.

Errors: incorrect noun 'lessons' should be 'lists'; incorrect verb form 'exceeded' should be present simple 'exceed' to match habitual present; sentence ended with incomplete clause 'I tend.' Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual actions (I tend to forget; things exceed), correct nouns, and finish clauses. Also use punctuation to separate ideas. Grammar problem type ID:10

× Does it work? Yes. I make lessons for my work not because I forgot them, but to make things easier and more systematic and to avoid messy or things getting interfering with each others. So I prefer to make less. Yes, it does work.

✓ Does it work? Yes. I make lists for my work not because I forget things, but to make things easier and more systematic and to avoid mess and things interfering with each other. So I prefer to make fewer lists. Yes, it does work.

Errors: 'make lessons for my work' should be 'make lists for my work'; 'forgot them' wrong tense and object — use 'forget things'; 'messy or things getting interfering with each others' is ungrammatical: use 'mess' and 'things interfering with each other'; 'make less' should be 'make fewer lists' (count noun). Suggestion: Use correct nouns and prepositions, correct plural/pronoun forms and comparative quantifier 'fewer' for countable nouns. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I believe some people prefer not to do laces because they can be having a solid memory which allow them to to remember things easily. So there will be need for them to make lists.

✓ I believe some people prefer not to make lists because they may have a good memory that allows them to remember things easily. So there will be no need for them to make lists.

Errors: 'do laces' is incorrect verb-noun collocation; use 'make lists'. 'can be having' is awkward; use 'may have' or 'have'. Relative clause 'which allow them' should be 'that allows them' to agree with singular 'memory'. 'there will be need' missing article and negation—intended meaning likely 'no need'. Suggestion: Use appropriate verbs, correct subject-verb agreement, and clear negation. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I prefer to do lists on my phone because it's more convenient than just using regular paper because my handwriting isn't the best. So I prefer to do the lessons on my phone and for if I make less on paper I tend to lose them also so on phone is more convenient.

✓ I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient than using regular paper, since my handwriting isn't the best. So I prefer to make the lists on my phone; if I make lists on paper, I tend to lose them, so the phone is more convenient.

Errors: 'do lists' should be 'make lists'; redundant 'because' clauses need restructuring; 'do the lessons' wrong noun; 'for if I make less on paper' ungrammatical—use 'if I make lists on paper'; 'on phone' needs article 'the phone'. Suggestion: Use correct verbs with 'lists', simplify clauses, and include articles for 'the phone'. Grammar problem type ID:11