List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 在回答时要更直接和自然，注意时态和语法错误，避免重复表达。可以用一到两句给出明确立场，再用一到两句具体说明原因或例子。注意动词时态（如 saw 应为 see 或 buy when I see）和单复数（a shopping mall/ shopping malls）。

Ví dụ: I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to browse and buy things spontaneously. For example, when I visit the mall I walk around and pick up items that catch my eye rather than following a strict list.

Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁、条理清晰，注意语法及搭配，如 'in work situations'、'essential'、'a to-do list'、'after I arrive'、'what things are a priority'。可用连接词让句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I find a to-do list essential for work because it helps me prioritise tasks each morning. For instance, when I arrive at the office I check my list and tackle the most urgent items first, which makes my day much more productive.

Gợi ý: 回答需更自然并提供更具体的原因或例子，避免冗长如 'because of the fact that'。注意单复数和定冠词（check the list）。可以加入对比或举例加强说服力。

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because it feels time-consuming and restrictive. For example, those with a flexible or creative working style may prefer spontaneity and find constant list-checking interrupts their flow.

Gợi ý: 回答要去掉多余连接词开头（如 'But'），补全缺失词汇（on my phone），注意语法（if something important comes）。可以说明具体操作或应用，提高细节性。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easier to edit and reorder items. For example, if a new urgent task appears I can quickly move it to the top or set a reminder in my notes app.

× I would rather shop freely. I often go to the shopping mall and just buy when I saw something I like.

✓ I would rather shop freely. I often go to the shopping mall and just buy when I see something I like.

句子中时态不一致。前半句使用一般现在时（I often go），后半句错误地使用了过去式 saw，造成时间参考混乱。应使用一般现在时 see 来与 often 和现在习惯动作保持一致。建议把动词统一为一般现在时，表示经常性的动作。

× The first thing I'll do after I arrived the company is to check what things is priority today.

✓ The first thing I'll do after I arrive at the company is to check what things are a priority today.

原句存在主谓一致和介词用法错误：1）after I arrived 使用了过去式，应与将来/计划意图保持一致，改为现在时 arrive（表示时间状语从句的现在时用于将来）。2）arrive the company 缺少介词，应为 arrive at the company。3）what things is priority 中主语 things 为复数，谓语应为 are；并且常用表达为 "are a priority" 或 "are priorities"。建议注意主语单复数和固定介词搭配。

× So To Do List is very important for me and it works well.

✓ So the to-do list is very important for me and it works well.

原句中名词短语缺少定冠词以及大小写不规范：To Do List 应写作 the to-do list（或 my to-do list）来指代具体的清单。此处需用单数可数名词前加定冠词 the。建议养成在特定事物前使用适当冠词并注意大小写和连字符。

× While in the work occasion, yes, I think that's initial for every worker to have A to do list every day.

✓ When I'm at work, yes, I think it's essential for every worker to have a to-do list every day.

原句结构不自然且用词错误：1）"While in the work occasion" 是不地道的表达，改为 When I'm at work 或 At work。2）"that's initial" 用词错误，应为 essential（必要的）。3）"A to do list" 冠词和连字符使用不当，改为 a to-do list。建议使用更自然的短语并注意词汇搭配。

× The first thing I'll do after I arrived the company is to check what things is priority today.

✓ The first thing I'll do after I arrive at the company is to check what things are a priority today.

（与之前相同句）原句使用了不应出现的过去式 arrived，应使用现在时 arrive 表示在将来时间状语从句中表示将来动作。建议在表示将来计划的时间状语从句使用一般现在时。

× The first thing I'll do after I arrived the company is to check what things is priority today.

✓ The first thing I'll do after I arrive at the company is to check what things are a priority today.

原句中缺少介词 at：arrived the company 应为 arrive at the company。表示 "到达某公司" 需用介词 at。建议熟记常见动词与介词搭配。

× It requires people to have a very organized mindset and always keep checking list.

✓ It requires people to have a very organized mindset and to always keep checking the list.

原句中动词并列形式混乱：have 和 keep 并列时 keep 后通常接动词 -ing（keeping），但更自然的结构是 to have ... and to always keep ... 或 have ... and always keep ... 此外，checking list 缺少定冠词 the list。建议保持并列动词形式一致并加上适当冠词。

× It requires people to have a very organized mindset and always keep checking list.

✓ It requires people to have a very organized mindset and to always keep checking the list.

原句中缺少定冠词 the 来指代前文提到的清单（list）。英语中可数名词在特指时通常需要定冠词。建议在特指对象前加 the。

× But I would say I prefer making lists on my because it's easier for me to reorganize the To Do List.

✓ But I would say I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easier for me to reorganize the to-do list.

原句中缺少名词 phone，导致 my 后悬空，句子不完整。应补全为 my phone。另外 to-do list 大小写和连字符需规范。建议检查代词或所有格后是否跟随名词。

× For example, if something important come, I can just place it at the top of my To Do List.

✓ For example, if something important comes, I can just place it at the top of my to-do list.

条件句中 if 从句说明一般事实或可能发生的情况，应使用一般现在时，原句用 come（原形）但缺第三人称单数-s，应为 comes。建议在第三人称单数情况下在动词末尾加 -s。