List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答基本相关但有语法和表达不够自然的地方，句子过长且有冗余。建议：1) 开头直接给出主题句并简洁回应，例如“I usually don’t.” 2) 用一到两句支持细节，注意动词形式和搭配（e.g. “make purchases”而不是“make purchase”）。3) 使用连接词使逻辑更清晰，如 “because” 或 “so”。4) 控制在最多五句内，避免重复信息。示例回答可包含一个具体例子以增强内容。

Ví dụ: I usually don’t make a shopping list because I enjoy browsing the market. For example, I often walk around different stalls and buy items on impulse when I see something attractive, which sometimes makes my shopping more expensive.

Gợi ý: 回答含有要点且结构较清楚，但有语法错误和措辞不自然（如“my good To Do List”）。建议：1) 先直接回答并用简短主题句说明频率或效果。2) 用一两句解释原因并用恰当的词汇（e.g. “it usually helps”）。3) 使用连接词衔接结果（e.g. “however, because”）。4) 提供具体例子说明如何调整计划。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a to-do list for important tasks because it helps me prioritize and stay organized. However, it doesn’t always work—if urgent messages or interruptions come up, I usually move unfinished items to the next day and adjust my schedule.

Gợi ý: 回答观点明确但表达混乱且有语法问题（如“the avoiding writing less”）。建议：1) 开门见山给出原因（一到两条原因足够）。2) 用更自然的短语描述情绪，如“feel anxious or pressured”。3) 句子间用连词连接，句法要简洁。4) 提供简单例子或结果来支持观点。

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they worry about not finishing everything and feel anxious about unmet expectations. For example, a person might avoid writing tasks down to escape the pressure of ticking off every item.

Gợi ý: 回答清晰表达偏好但有小语法问题（如“because feels”）和口语化表达（“a little richer”不够准确）。建议：1) 用一句主题句明确偏好。2) 用一到两句比较纸质与手机的优缺点，使用恰当形容词（e.g. “tangible”，“convenient”）。3) 用连接词如“however”或“but”来对比。

Ví dụ: I prefer making my daily to-do list on paper because it feels more tangible and helps me remember tasks better. However, when I’m out or need to share items quickly with someone, I use my phone because it’s more convenient and easily accessible.

× I often make purchase very costly when I see something I like.

✓ I often make purchases that are very costly when I see something I like.

原句中“make purchase”中的“purchase”应为可数名词复数形式“purchases”，因为这里说的是重复发生的购买行为；此外需要用从句或定语短语修饰“purchases”，因此改为“make purchases that are very costly”。建议：注意可数名词在泛指重复行为时通常用复数。

× Yes, sometimes my good To Do List when I have important tasks because it helps me stay organized and prioritize my work.

✓ Yes. Sometimes I make a good to-do list when I have important tasks because it helps me stay organized and prioritize my work.

原句缺少谓语动词，句子结构不完整（Sentence structure errors）。需补上动词“make”并调整冠词及小写格式："a good to-do list"。建议：每个句子应有主语和谓语，表达“制作清单”需用动词“make”。

× Unexpected interruptions or urgent messages often come up, so sometimes I move and finish items to the next day's list.

✓ Unexpected interruptions or urgent messages often come up, so sometimes I move items and finish them on the next day's list.

原句中“move and finish items to the next day's list”在动词搭配和介词使用上不自然。应把动作分开并用正确介词：“move items ... to the next day's list” 和 “finish them on the next day's list”。同时将“finish”与宾语“them”搭配以保持句子清晰。建议：分开两个动作并为每个动作提供合适的宾语或介词短语。

× I think some people don't like making lists because they tend to procrastinate. They feel anxious or pressure at the idea of not being able to finish every task, so the avoiding writing less to escape that stress.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they tend to procrastinate. They feel anxious or pressured at the idea of not being able to finish every task, so they avoid writing lists to escape that stress.

原句有多处问题：1) “feel anxious or pressure”中“pressure”应为形容词或使用“feel pressured”；2) “the avoiding writing less”结构错误且使用了错误的定冠词与形式，应改为“they avoid writing lists”。总体为冠词、词类及句子结构错误。建议：使用正确的形容词/被动感受表达（anxious/pressured），并用动词短语“avoid writing lists”来表达“避免写清单”。

× I prefer to write my daily To Do List on paper because feels more tangible and like a little richer to me, while when I'm out or need to share a list quickly, I use my phone because it's more convenient and accessible.

✓ I prefer to write my daily to-do list on paper because it feels more tangible and a little richer to me. When I'm out or need to share a list quickly, I use my phone because it's more convenient and accessible.

原句问题包括：1) 缺少主语“it”在“because feels more tangible”；2) “like a little richer”表达不自然，应为“a little richer”；3) 句子过长且连词使用不当，建议拆分为两句。涉及定冠词和句子结构错误。建议：注意非限定性从句需完整主谓结构，使用“it feels...”并把修饰语放在名词前或使用副词“a little”。