List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, clarity and relevance. Use a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and specific details. Avoid irrelevant names unless explained. Use linking words to connect ideas. Limit to 2–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go out. It helps me avoid forgetting items because I often have a lot to buy, and I tick things off as I pack them. For example, yesterday the list saved me from buying duplicate ingredients.

Gợi ý: Clarify job-related routines and use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. State directly if it works, give a reason and an example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' and avoid vague phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a task list for work and it works well. Because I am a lawyer and handle many cases, the list helps me prioritise urgent tasks and manage deadlines. For instance, I list court appearances first, then client meetings and paperwork.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear main idea and two specific reasons. Avoid hesitations and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to make reasons coherent.

Ví dụ: I think some people dislike lists because they find them time-consuming and unnecessary. For example, some trust their memory and prefer flexibility, while others feel lists make life feel too rigid.

Gợi ý: Give a direct preference, correct grammar, and specific reasons. Explain advantages of your choice with a brief example. Keep to 2–3 clear sentences and avoid unclear words.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can edit items quickly. For example, I use a notes app to add items while shopping and tick them off as I go, which prevents me from losing paper lists.

× Yes I do, I usually make a list when I'm go shopping just because I'm quite easily to forgot the thing.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually make a list when I go shopping because I quite easily forget things.

The sentence contains present tense and verb form errors. 'I'm go shopping' incorrectly combines present continuous with base verb; correct is 'I go shopping' for habitual action. 'I'm quite easily to forgot the thing' mixes incorrect structure and past form; use 'I quite easily forget things' for present simple habit and plural 'things'. Also add punctuation for clarity.

× So like Magdalene helped me to remember the thing that I need to buy on that day.

✓ For example, Magdalene helped me remember the things I needed to buy that day.

Pronoun and tense issues: 'the thing that I need to buy on that day' is awkward. Use past tense 'needed' to match 'helped' and plural 'things' if multiple items. Also 'helped me remember' does not need 'to' after 'helped' in this context.

× Yes I do, I also do the list for my work tools because as I work as a lawyer they involve many work and in the day.

✓ Yes, I do. I also make a list for my work because, as a lawyer, I have a lot of work during the day.

Issues with articles and word choice: 'do the list' should be 'make a list'. 'work tools' is unclear; likely 'work'. 'they involve many work and in the day' is ungrammatical; use 'I have a lot of work during the day'. Add commas for clarity and correct article use.

× So like making a list helped me to prioritize each word which one is like.

✓ Making a list helps me prioritize tasks and decide which ones are most important.

The original is unclear and contains wrong words ('word' instead of 'work' or 'task') and tense mismatch. Use present simple 'helps' for a general statement and clearer vocabulary: 'prioritize tasks' and 'decide which ones are most important'.

× So I believe that some people might find making this quite annoying and not necessary for them.

✓ I believe some people might find making lists quite annoying and unnecessary.

Word order and article use: 'making this' is vague; use 'making lists'. 'not necessary for them' is wordy; 'unnecessary' is concise. Tense/modal 'might' is fine.

× Umm, so they're because they can remember the things and they're.

✓ They may feel they can remember things without a list.

Original is fragmented and uses 'they're because' incorrectly. Provide a complete sentence: subject + modal + verb. Remove redundant 'the' before 'things'.

× If I had to choose between like making a list on paper or on my phone, I prefer making a list on my phone because I it's quite easily and convenient to make an idiot and you may.

✓ If I had to choose between making a list on paper or on my phone, I prefer my phone because it is easy and convenient to do so.

Multiple issues: unnecessary filler 'like' removed. 'I it's quite easily and convenient' mixes pronouns and adverbs; use 'it is easy and convenient'. 'to make an idiot and you may' is nonsensical—likely intended 'to make a list and you may' or 'to edit and you may'; replace with 'to do so' for clarity. Use gerund phrases consistently.