Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often go to library usually. And I often use library usually three times a week for reading books. Boring books, boring computer.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I usually borrow box and I read a lot of different kinds of novels and read some books about my study and I also borrow computers to finish my work online.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Of course, I usually went to the school library when I was a kid and. I love reading comics and novels in school too.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
I think yes, because some of the family, their parents maybe have a lot of work, they can't care children, so they let the children go to the library to have their spare time. So I think, yeah, Chinese kids often go to library.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和重复表达,且内容不够连贯。建议避免重复使用“usually”,并且用更自然的表达方式描述你去图书馆的频率和原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually go to the library about three times a week to read books and study. I find it a quiet place that helps me concentrate better.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当,如“borrow box”应为“borrow books”。建议使用更准确的词汇,并且用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually borrow books, including novels and study materials. Besides reading, I also use the computers there to complete my online assignments.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答较为简短且有语法错误,如句子未完整。建议补充更多细节,并注意句子完整性和时态一致。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often went to the school library when I was a child. I especially enjoyed reading comics and novels during my free time at school.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够流畅,句子结构混乱。建议简化句子结构,使用连接词使表达更自然,并提供更具体的理由。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think many Chinese children often go to the library. Since their parents are busy with work, libraries provide a good place for kids to spend their free time productively.
× Yes, I often go to library usually.
✓ Yes, I often go to the library usually.
这里缺少定冠词“the”,因为“library”是特指的图书馆,应该用“the library”。
× And I often use library usually three times a week for reading books.
✓ And I often use the library usually three times a week for reading books.
同样,“library”前面需要加定冠词“the”,表示特指的图书馆。
× Boring books, boring computer.
✓ Boring books, boring computers.
“computer”应为复数形式“computers”,因为这里指的是多台电脑。
× I usually borrow box and I read a lot of different kinds of novels and read some books about my study and I also borrow computers to finish my work online.
✓ I usually borrow books and I read a lot of different kinds of novels and read some books about my study and I also borrow computers to finish my work online.
“box”应为“books”,因为语境中指的是书籍。
× I usually borrow box and I read a lot of different kinds of novels and read some books about my study and I also borrow computers to finish my work online.
✓ I usually borrow books and I read a lot of different kinds of novels and read some books about my study and I also borrow computers to finish my work online.
这里“borrow books”不需要冠词,但“borrow box”是错误拼写,应改为“books”。
× So I think, yeah, Chinese kids often go to library.
✓ So I think, yeah, Chinese kids often go to the library.
“library”前应加定冠词“the”,表示特指的图书馆。