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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Of course, when I have examination I will go to the library because I think their atmosphere will be good.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do in the library?

Thí sinh

I always review my course in the library.

Giám khảo

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Thí sinh

Well, I guess not, because when I was a child, I often play games with my friends. I don't like reading, you know? I think it's boring.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Maybe. I think yes, because I remember once I go to Guangzhou Library to visit my parents, there are a lot of young adults or teenagers in the library, you know, they are so.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Do you often go to the library?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误,如“when I have examination”应为“when I have examinations”或“when I have an exam”。此外,表达应更自然流畅,可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library, especially when I have exams because I find the quiet atmosphere very helpful for concentrating.

What do you usually do in the library?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答过于简短,缺乏细节和连接词。建议扩展答案,说明具体做什么复习,如何利用图书馆资源。

Ví dụ: I usually review my course materials in the library by reading textbooks and taking notes because it helps me focus better than studying at home.

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 语法错误较多,如“play”应为“played”。表达不够正式,口语化词汇“you know”应避免。建议用更正式的表达并增加连接词。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't go to the library much when I was a child because I preferred playing games with my friends. I found reading quite boring at that time.

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误明显,如“once I go”应为“once I went”。句子未完整表达意思,缺乏具体细节和逻辑连接。建议完整表达观点并使用正确时态。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think many Chinese kids often go to the library. For example, when I visited Guangzhou Library with my parents, I saw many teenagers and young adults studying there, which shows that libraries are popular among young people.

Ngữ pháp

Modal verb usage

× Of course, when I have examination I will go to the library because I think their atmosphere will be good.

Of course, when I have an examination I will go to the library because I think the atmosphere there will be good.

这里缺少冠词“an”,因为“examination”是可数名词,单数形式前需要冠词。并且“their atmosphere”应改为“the atmosphere there”,以正确表达“那里的氛围”。

Singular and plural issue

× Of course, when I have examination I will go to the library because I think their atmosphere will be good.

Of course, when I have an examination I will go to the library because I think the atmosphere there will be good.

“examination”是可数名词,单数形式前需要冠词“an”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Of course, when I have examination I will go to the library because I think their atmosphere will be good.

Of course, when I have an examination I will go to the library because I think the atmosphere there will be good.

“their atmosphere”用法不当,应使用“the atmosphere there”来表达“那里的氛围”。

Verb in the present participle form

× I always review my course in the library.

I always review my courses in the library.

“course”应使用复数形式“courses”,因为通常指多门课程。

Past tense issue

× Well, I guess not, because when I was a child, I often play games with my friends.

Well, I guess not, because when I was a child, I often played games with my friends.

描述过去习惯动作时,动词应使用过去时态“played”。

Present tense issue

× I don't like reading, you know?

I didn't like reading, you know?

这里描述的是过去的喜好,应使用过去时态“didn't like”。

Past tense issue

× Maybe. I think yes, because I remember once I go to Guangzhou Library to visit my parents, there are a lot of young adults or teenagers in the library, you know, they are so.

Maybe. I think yes, because I remember once I went to Guangzhou Library to visit my parents; there were a lot of young adults or teenagers in the library, you know, they were.

“go”应改为过去时“went”,“are”应改为过去时“were”,因为描述的是过去的事情。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BoringTedious
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
YoungYouthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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