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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Yes, as I'm a college student, I often go to the library for study. I also do some reading there. The library can make me feel relaxed and I really love to go to it.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do in the library?

Thí sinh

As I just mentioned before, I often study in the library because the atmosphere there can make me concentrated on my study. I also do some reading, especially novels. I really love to read it there.

Giám khảo

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Thí sinh

I seldom. I think when I was a kid I usually went out to play instead of reading in the library 'cause I didn't like reading much at that time.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Yeah, Chinese kid is usually allowed to go to the library because when I go to our Public Library, there are so many Chinese kids there. They all love reading and I think it's a good trend.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you often go to the library?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但表达略显重复,且部分句子结构不够地道。建议避免重复表达“go to the library”,并使用更丰富的词汇和句式,使回答更简洁流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I frequently visit the library to study and read. It provides a quiet environment that helps me concentrate and also relax after a busy day.

What do you usually do in the library?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“make me concentrated”应为“help me concentrate”。此外,重复使用“read”显得单调,建议使用多样化表达,并注意衔接词的使用。

Ví dụ: Usually, I study in the library because its quiet atmosphere helps me concentrate. Besides studying, I enjoy reading novels there, which makes my visits more enjoyable.

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答不完整,缺少主语和完整句子。建议使用完整句子直接回答问题,并提供具体原因,避免口语化缩写。

Ví dụ: I rarely went to the library when I was a child because I preferred playing outside to reading. At that time, I was not very interested in books.

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“Chinese kid is”应为“Chinese kids usually are”。表达不够正式,建议避免口语化词汇,使用更准确的句式,并提供更具体的细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese children often visit libraries. For example, when I go to the public library, I see many kids there who enjoy reading, which reflects a positive reading culture.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Yeah, Chinese kid is usually allowed to go to the library because when I go to our Public Library, there are so many Chinese kids there.

Yeah, Chinese kids are usually allowed to go to the library because when I go to our Public Library, there are so many Chinese kids there.

这里的主语是复数形式,应该用复数名词 "kids",并且动词要用复数形式 "are",表示复数主语和谓语的一致。

Singular and plural issue

× I really love to read it there.

I really love to read there.

"read" 后面不需要加代词 "it",因为 "reading" 是泛指行为,不特指某个对象。加上 "it" 会造成语法错误。

Sentence structure errors

× I seldom.

I seldom did.

"I seldom" 是不完整的句子,缺少谓语动词。应该补充动词使句子完整,如 "I seldom did." 或者更完整的表达 "I seldom went to the library."。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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