Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Of course I go to the library 2 * a week because I enjoyed it to read book and what and there is to do.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I do my homework and read different book and read book to exam write science, mathematics and chemistry.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes I did. I went to library in my school because I like it to sleep in free time at school.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
I think Chinese kid right to. Bribery because Chinese kid. Has a.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและถูกต้องทางไวยากรณ์ รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำซ้อนและคำที่ไม่จำเป็น ควรตอบตรงคำถามและเพิ่มรายละเอียดที่เกี่ยวข้องอย่างเหมาะสม เช่น จำนวนครั้งที่ไปและเหตุผลที่ไปห้องสมุด
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually go to the library twice a week because I enjoy reading books and studying in a quiet environment.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: ควรใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และเชื่อมโยงความคิดอย่างมีเหตุผล รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมและหลากหลายเพื่ออธิบายกิจกรรมที่ทำในห้องสมุดอย่างชัดเจน
Ví dụ: In the library, I usually do my homework and read various books, especially to prepare for exams in subjects like science, mathematics, and chemistry.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: ควรตอบคำถามอย่างตรงประเด็นและใช้ประโยคที่ถูกต้อง รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงการใช้คำที่ไม่เหมาะสม เช่น 'sleep' ควรอธิบายกิจกรรมที่ทำในห้องสมุดตอนเด็กอย่างชัดเจน
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. When I was a kid, I often went to the school library to read books and spend my free time productively.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: คำตอบไม่ชัดเจนและไม่สมบูรณ์ ควรตอบคำถามอย่างตรงประเด็น ใช้ประโยคที่สมบูรณ์และมีความหมายชัดเจน รวมถึงใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสมเพื่อแสดงความคิดเห็นเกี่ยวกับนิสัยการไปห้องสมุดของเด็กจีน
Ví dụ: I think many Chinese kids often go to the library because they value education and like to study in a quiet place.
× Of course I go to the library 2 * a week because I enjoyed it to read book and what and there is to do.
✓ Of course I go to the library 2 times a week because I enjoy reading books and there is a lot to do.
The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to more than one book. Also, 'enjoyed' should be present tense 'enjoy' to match the present tense 'go'. The phrase '2 * a week' is corrected to '2 times a week' for clarity.
× I do my homework and read different book and read book to exam write science, mathematics and chemistry.
✓ I do my homework and read different books and read books to prepare for exams in science, mathematics, and chemistry.
The word 'book' should be plural 'books' because it refers to multiple books. Also, 'exam write' is corrected to 'prepare for exams' for clarity and grammatical correctness.
× Yes I did. I went to library in my school because I like it to sleep in free time at school.
✓ Yes, I did. I went to the library in my school because I liked to sleep during free time at school.
The verb 'like' should be in past tense 'liked' to match the past tense context. Also, 'to sleep in free time' is corrected to 'to sleep during free time' for proper preposition use.
× I think Chinese kid right to. Bribery because Chinese kid. Has a.
✓ I think Chinese kids go to the library too because Chinese kids have access.
The word 'kid' should be plural 'kids' to agree with the plural subject. The original sentence is fragmented and unclear; it is corrected to a coherent sentence matching the intended meaning.