Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'curriculum course' and clarify your reason more smoothly. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually go to the library once a week because I need to study for my important courses, even though I am quite busy.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains redundancy. The phrase 'novels are most important reading materials for the betterment of our history' is confusing. Try to give a clearer reason why you like novels and use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ví dụ: I usually read novels in the library because I enjoy stories that help me understand different cultures and historical periods better.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and adding a linking word for coherence. Also, try to use a more natural expression for 'when I was child'.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a child because I wasn't aware of it at that time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is not very relevant or natural. Instead of focusing on your nationality, try to give a general opinion or say you are not sure politely. Use linking words to make your answer smoother.

Ví dụ: I'm not sure about Chinese kids, but I think many children enjoy going to the library to read and study.

× Yes, I visit the library once a week because I am busy with my curriculum course which is more important for me.

✓ Yes, I visit the library once a week because I am busy with my curriculum courses which are more important to me.

The phrase 'curriculum course' should be pluralized to 'curriculum courses' to correctly refer to multiple courses. Also, 'more important for me' should be 'more important to me' as 'important to' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× I mostly read novels, which I like most because novels are most important reading materials for the betterment of our history.

✓ I mostly read novels, which I like the most because novels are the most important reading materials for the betterment of our history.

The superlative 'most' should be preceded by 'the' when used as an adjective or adverb. Therefore, 'like most' should be 'like the most' and 'most important' should be 'the most important' to be grammatically correct.

× No, I did not go to the library because I didn't even know about the library when I was child.

✓ No, I did not go to the library because I didn't even know about the library when I was a child.

The noun 'child' requires an article 'a' when used in this context. The phrase should be 'when I was a child' to be grammatically correct.

× I do not know about this Chinese kid because I am Nepali so I do not know about it.

✓ I do not know about Chinese kids because I am Nepali, so I do not know about it.

The phrase 'this Chinese kid' is incorrect when referring generally to Chinese children. It should be 'Chinese kids' to refer to children in general. Also, a comma is needed before 'so' to separate the clauses.