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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Yes, I often go to the library to borrow some science books because the nearest library is situated by my house.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do in the library?

Thí sinh

I usually read some books in the library, especially science spec and sometimes and also I sometimes study English in there because it's very quiet.

Giám khảo

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Thí sinh

Yes, because there is a library near my house by 5 minutes to work 22 foot by foot so I could easily go there.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Thí sinh

I'm not sure about Chinese kids go to library every day or sometimes because I'm a Japanese, but I heard about Chinese hierarchy depend on their study, so maybe children go.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Do you often go to the library?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答は自然ですが、"situated by my house"は不自然な表現です。"near my house"や"close to my house"の方が適切です。また、理由を述べる際にもう少し具体的な説明を加えると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library to borrow science books because the nearest library is close to my house, making it very convenient for me.

What do you usually do in the library?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答が少し混乱しており、文法的な誤りや冗長な表現があります。"science spec"は意味が不明瞭で、"sometimes and also I sometimes"は重複しています。より明確で簡潔な表現を心がけ、接続詞を適切に使いましょう。

Ví dụ: I usually read science books in the library, and sometimes I study English there because it is very quiet.

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答が不明瞭で文法的に誤りがあります。"by 5 minutes to work 22 foot by foot"は意味が通じません。過去形を使い、簡潔で明確な説明を心がけましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to go to the library near my house when I was a kid because it was only a five-minute walk away.

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答が不自然で文法的に誤りがあります。"Chinese hierarchy depend on their study"は意味が不明瞭です。自分の意見をはっきり述べ、理由を簡潔に説明しましょう。

Ví dụ: I'm not sure if Chinese kids go to the library often, but I think many of them do because studying is very important in their culture.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, I often go to the library to borrow some science books because the nearest library is situated by my house.

Yes, I often go to the library to borrow some science books because the nearest library is situated near my house.

The preposition 'by' is incorrectly used to indicate location here. The correct preposition to express proximity is 'near'. Using 'near' clearly indicates that the library is close to the house.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I usually read some books in the library, especially science spec and sometimes and also I sometimes study English in there because it's very quiet.

I usually read some books in the library, especially science books, and sometimes I also study English there because it's very quiet.

The phrase 'science spec' is incorrect; it should be 'science books'. The phrase 'sometimes and also I sometimes' is redundant and awkward; it is better to say 'sometimes I also'. The preposition 'in there' is incorrect; 'there' alone is sufficient. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical correctness.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, because there is a library near my house by 5 minutes to work 22 foot by foot so I could easily go there.

Yes, because there is a library near my house, about 5 minutes' walk from my workplace, so I could easily go there.

The phrase 'by 5 minutes to work 22 foot by foot' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'about 5 minutes' walk from my workplace'. This uses the correct prepositions and units to express distance and time clearly.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I'm not sure about Chinese kids go to library every day or sometimes because I'm a Japanese, but I heard about Chinese hierarchy depend on their study, so maybe children go.

I'm not sure whether Chinese kids go to the library every day or sometimes because I'm Japanese, but I heard that Chinese hierarchy depends on their study, so maybe children go.

The phrase 'about Chinese kids go to library' is incorrect; it should be 'whether Chinese kids go to the library'. The article 'the' is missing before 'library'. 'I'm a Japanese' should be 'I'm Japanese' as nationality adjectives do not take an article. 'I heard about Chinese hierarchy depend' should be 'I heard that Chinese hierarchy depends' to use correct conjunction and verb agreement.

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