Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often go to the library to study because library is a quiet place that makes me focus in studying.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I usually study for the lesson and prepare the exam because library is quiet and peaceful. That can help me concentrate concentrate better on my studies.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Actually not when I was a kid. I don't like the place quiet and calm. I more prefer the places with lots of people.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, Chinese keys all always have that exams and they prefer go to the library to prepare for upcoming exams.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时应注意语法和表达的自然性。例如,“library is a quiet place”应加冠词“the library”,并且“makes me focus in studying”表达不够地道,建议改为“helps me concentrate on my studies”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library to study because the library is a quiet place that helps me concentrate on my studies.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇“concentrate concentrate”,且缺少冠词“the library”。建议避免重复,使用连接词使句子更连贯,如“because the library is quiet and peaceful, which helps me concentrate better.”
Ví dụ: I usually study for my lessons and prepare for exams because the library is quiet and peaceful, which helps me concentrate better on my studies.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多,如“Actually not when I was a kid”应为“No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid.”,“I don't like the place quiet and calm”应为“I didn't like quiet and calm places.”,并且“more prefer”不正确,应为“prefer”。建议注意时态和句子结构。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I didn't like quiet and calm places. I preferred places with lots of people.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法和拼写错误,如“Chinese keys”应为“Chinese kids”,“all always have that exams”表达不清且错误,建议改为“Chinese kids often have exams”,并且“prefer go to”应为“prefer to go to”。建议加强语法和词汇的准确使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese kids often have exams, so they prefer to go to the library to prepare for upcoming tests.
× Yes, I often go to the library to study because library is a quiet place that makes me focus in studying.
✓ Yes, I often go to the library to study because the library is a quiet place that helps me focus on studying.
这里缺少定冠词“the”,因为特指“图书馆”这个地方。英语中,单数可数名词前通常需要冠词。建议在“library”前加上“the”。
× I usually study for the lesson and prepare the exam because library is quiet and peaceful.
✓ I usually study for the lesson and prepare for the exam because the library is quiet and peaceful.
“library”前缺少定冠词“the”,因为这里特指图书馆这个地方。另外,“prepare the exam”应改为“prepare for the exam”,动词“prepare”后需要介词“for”。
× That can help me concentrate concentrate better on my studies.
✓ That can help me concentrate better on my studies.
句中“concentrate”重复,应删除多余的一个。
× Actually not when I was a kid.
✓ Actually, not when I was a kid.
句首缺少逗号,且表达不完整,建议加逗号使语气更自然。
× I don't like the place quiet and calm.
✓ I didn't like quiet and calm places.
“like”后应接动词-ing形式或名词,且时态应与“when I was a kid”保持一致,改为过去时“didn't like”。“the place quiet and calm”结构不正确,应改为“quiet and calm places”。
× I more prefer the places with lots of people.
✓ I prefer places with lots of people more.
“more prefer”结构不正确,动词“prefer”本身表示比较,不需要“more”,应将“more”放在句尾作状语。
× Yes, Chinese keys all always have that exams and they prefer go to the library to prepare for upcoming exams.
✓ Yes, Chinese kids always have exams and they prefer to go to the library to prepare for upcoming exams.
“keys”应为“kids”,表示“孩子们”;“have that exams”中“that”不合适,应去掉;“prefer go”应为“prefer to go”,动词“prefer”后需加不定式“to go”。