Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat long and a bit repetitive. Try to make your response more concise and natural by directly answering the question first, then briefly explaining the reason. Also, avoid redundancy such as "for the reason that" and "in order to" used together.

Ví dụ: I have visited the library three times this year during my first year at university because I needed to collect materials to prepare for exams.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and a bit awkward. Try to use simpler and more natural expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly and avoid repeating the same phrase.

Ví dụ: In the library, I usually read books and study materials to prepare for my exams. Mostly, I spend my time reading there.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but could be improved by correcting grammar and making it more natural. For example, use "I didn't use to" instead of "I didn't used to" and avoid redundancy. Also, try to add a linking word to connect your ideas.

Ví dụ: When I was a child, I didn't use to go to the library because my teachers provided all the materials I needed at school.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammar and word choice errors, such as "oftenly" and awkward phrasing. Try to use correct adverbs and clearer sentence structures. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: In my opinion, Chinese children often use the library, especially to prepare for their school assessments. Therefore, many of them visit the library regularly.

× Well, this year actually I have visited the library for three times during the first year of the university for the reason that I was preparing for the exam and I in order to collect necessary sources, I supposed to go to the library.

✓ Well, this year actually I visited the library three times during my first year at university because I was preparing for exams and needed to collect necessary resources, so I was supposed to go to the library.

The use of 'have visited' with a specific time frame 'this year' and 'during the first year' is incorrect; simple past tense 'visited' is appropriate. 'For three times' should be 'three times' without 'for'. 'Supposed to go' needs 'was' to indicate past obligation. Also, 'sources' is better as 'resources' in this context.

× Well, the activities in which I engaged in libraries are reading the books and reading the necessary materials for preparing the for preparing for examinations.

✓ Well, the activities in which I engaged in libraries are reading books and reading the necessary materials to prepare for examinations.

The phrase 'for preparing the for preparing for' is redundant and incorrect; it should be 'to prepare for'. Also, 'the books' should be 'books' as a general activity.

× So generally speaking, mostly I do the readings in the library.

✓ So generally speaking, mostly I do reading in the library.

'Readings' is not commonly used in this context; 'reading' as an uncountable noun is more appropriate.

× In my childhood, I didn't used to go to the libraries as all necessary sources were given by my teachers at primary school.

✓ In my childhood, I didn't use to go to the libraries as all necessary resources were given by my teachers at primary school.

'Didn't used to' is incorrect; the correct form is 'didn't use to'. Also, 'sources' is better replaced with 'resources' here.

× So for this reasons I didn't spend time going to the library.

✓ So for this reason I didn't spend time going to the library.

'Reasons' is plural but 'this' is singular; they should agree. 'This reason' is correct here.

× Well, in my opinion, the Chinese pupils are oftenly using the library.

✓ Well, in my opinion, Chinese pupils often use the library.

'Oftenly' is not a correct adverb form; 'often' is correct. Also, 'are using' is less natural here than simple present 'use' for habitual action.

× The special reason for it could be the starting and preparing for the assessments that they have the school.

✓ The main reason could be that they start preparing for the assessments they have at school.

The original sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. 'Starting and preparing for the assessments that they have the school' lacks prepositions and proper structure. The correction clarifies meaning and corrects structure.

× So I think that yes, they use, they go to library where we are from.

✓ So I think that yes, they use and go to the library where we are from.

'Library' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'use, they go' is better connected with 'and' for clarity.