Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I often go to the library in my school and I often go to the there with my friends, my classmate.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
In the library I usually read the document and search for some information for is.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
No I didn't when I were a kid. My home is is so far from the library and I usually treat books at the at the school.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, many Chinese children frequently visit the libraries, especially in urban areas where access to such facility is easier. Libraries provide a quiet environment for studying and offer a graduate of books that support the.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và chính xác hơn. Ví dụ, tránh lặp từ "often" và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như "go to the there". Hãy thêm một câu giải thích ngắn gọn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library at my school. I usually go there with my classmates because we like to study together in a quiet place.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng và đầy đủ hơn, đồng thời sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng. Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và câu bổ sung. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi như "for is" không rõ nghĩa.
Ví dụ: In the library, I usually read books and search for information related to my studies. It helps me complete my assignments and learn new things.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là thì và số ít số nhiều. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và tránh lỗi lặp từ như "is is" và "at the at the". Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể để câu trả lời tự nhiên và đầy đủ hơn.
Ví dụ: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because my home was far from it. Instead, I usually borrowed books from my school library.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về từ vựng và ngữ pháp như "graduate of books" không đúng. Bạn nên sử dụng từ phù hợp hơn và hoàn chỉnh câu để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, many Chinese children often visit libraries, especially in cities where libraries are easily accessible. Libraries offer a quiet place to study and a wide range of books to support their learning.
× I often go to the library in my school and I often go to the there with my friends, my classmate.
✓ I often go to the library in my school and I often go there with my friends, my classmates.
The word 'classmate' should be plural 'classmates' because it refers to more than one friend. Also, 'go to the there' is incorrect; it should be 'go there' without 'the'.
× In the library I usually read the document and search for some information for is.
✓ In the library, I usually read documents and search for some information for it.
The pronoun 'is' is incorrect here; it should be 'it' to refer to the information. Also, 'the document' should be plural 'documents' to match general usage when talking about reading materials.
× No I didn't when I were a kid. My home is is so far from the library and I usually treat books at the at the school.
✓ No, I didn't when I was a kid. My home was so far from the library and I usually read books at school.
The verb 'were' should be 'was' to agree with the singular subject 'I' in past tense. 'Is is' is a repetition error and should be corrected to 'was' to match past tense. 'Treat books' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'read books'. Also, 'at the at the school' should be 'at school'.
× Yes, many Chinese children frequently visit the libraries, especially in urban areas where access to such facility is easier. Libraries provide a quiet environment for studying and offer a graduate of books that support the.
✓ Yes, many Chinese children frequently visit libraries, especially in urban areas where access to such facilities is easier. Libraries provide a quiet environment for studying and offer a great variety of books that support them.
'Libraries' is correct, but 'such facility' should be plural 'such facilities' to agree with 'libraries'. 'Graduate of books' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'great variety of books'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'support the' which should be 'support them' referring to the children.