Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often go to the library. And you know, I like reading, so I often go to the library.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
Umm, let me think. I usually reading books in the library or do my homework in the library. I like reading so I often go to the library to reading some books.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
No, I didn't go to the library when I were a kid because I was too young to know the library displays and my parents even not take me to the library, so I even not know the.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Oh, uh, yes. I think Chinese kids often go to the library because, uh, when they grow up, they go to the university and the university has library and they often go to the library to pass the some examines.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时有重复,表达不够自然。建议避免重复表达相同内容,回答时更简洁自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often visit the library because I enjoy reading a variety of books.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 语法错误较多,且回答重复。建议注意动词形式,避免重复,并使用连接词使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually read books or do my homework there because it's a quiet place that helps me concentrate.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 语法错误严重,句子不完整,表达不清晰。建议加强语法基础,使用完整句子表达清楚意思。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't visit the library as a child because I was too young, and my parents didn't take me there.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和口语填充词较多,表达不够流畅。建议减少口语填充词,注意语法准确性,并使用连接词使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, many Chinese children often visit libraries, especially when they attend university, as libraries provide resources to help them prepare for exams.
× I usually reading books in the library or do my homework in the library.
✓ I usually read books in the library or do my homework in the library.
这里的动词应该用原形,因为助动词或情态动词后面接动词原形,或者在一般现在时中,主语是第一人称单数时,动词用原形。'usually'表示习惯动作,动词用一般现在时。
× I like reading so I often go to the library to reading some books.
✓ I like reading so I often go to the library to read some books.
动词不定式to后面应该接动词原形,不能用动名词形式。这里'to reading'应改为'to read'。
× No, I didn't go to the library when I were a kid because I was too young to know the library displays and my parents even not take me to the library, so I even not know the.
✓ No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I was too young to know the library displays and my parents didn't even take me to the library, so I didn't even know it.
过去时态中,主语'I'对应的be动词是'was',不是'were'。否定句中,助动词'did'后面动词用原形,'not take'应改为'didn't take'。'even not know'应改为'didn't even know'。句尾缺少宾语,补充为'it'。
× ...and they often go to the library to pass the some examines.
✓ ...and they often go to the library to pass some exams.
'pass the some examines'中,'the'和'some'不能同时使用,且'examines'应为名词'exams'。应去掉'the',将'examines'改为'exams'。