Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói về tần suất và lý do cụ thể khi bạn đến thư viện.

Ví dụ: I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my home. However, I visit it occasionally when I need to do research since most ebooks and articles are available online, which is more convenient and saves me travel time.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Hãy bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng liên từ để giải thích lý do hoặc kết quả. Nội dung nên cụ thể và mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I usually go to the library to do academic research because books in my field are very expensive online. Therefore, I prefer to use the free resources at the library, which helps me save a lot of money.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì quá khứ cho câu hỏi về quá khứ và tránh lặp từ. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và thêm chi tiết cụ thể hơn về trải nghiệm của bạn khi còn nhỏ.

Ví dụ: Yes, when I was a kid, I often went to the library if I wasn't busy. I especially enjoyed spending time in the children's section because there were many comics and fairy tales, which I found fun and relaxing.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng số nhiều đúng cách và câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy dùng liên từ để kết nối ý và cung cấp ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể hơn để câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

Ví dụ: No, not many Chinese kids visit the library nowadays because most materials are available online. From what I have observed, children tend to rely more on digital resources for both learning and entertainment.

× Not not into visiting library because there were no library located near my home.

✓ I'm not into visiting the library because there is no library located near my home.

The original sentence has a double negation 'Not not' which is incorrect and confusing. Also, 'there were no library' is incorrect because 'library' is singular and requires 'there is' instead of 'there were'. The corrected sentence uses proper negation and correct 'there is' for singular noun.

× Not not into visiting library because there were no library located near my home.

✓ I'm not into visiting the library because there is no library located near my home.

The noun 'library' is singular and requires the singular verb 'is' instead of 'were'. Also, 'library' should be preceded by the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× I only visiting for researching and almost ebook on online article can be found on Internet.

✓ I only visit for research and almost every ebook or online article can be found on the Internet.

The verb 'visiting' is incorrectly used; it should be the base form 'visit' after 'I only'. Also, 'researching' should be the noun 'research' here. 'Almost ebook on online article' is ungrammatical; it should be 'almost every ebook or online article'. 'Internet' requires the definite article 'the'.

× I only visiting for researching and almost ebook on online article can be found on Internet.

✓ I only visit for research and almost every ebook or online article can be found on the Internet.

The word 'Internet' is a unique entity and requires the definite article 'the' before it.

× Now it's more convenient and help me to save time for traveling.

✓ Now it's more convenient and helps me save time on traveling.

The verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'help me to save' can be simplified to 'helps me save'. 'For traveling' is better expressed as 'on traveling' or 'when traveling'.

× I only visits for Academy research we could academic book in my field is super pricey if I'm trying to get online so I usually head to library.

✓ I only visit for academic research because academic books in my field are super pricey if I try to get them online, so I usually head to the library.

The verb 'visits' should be 'visit' to agree with the first person singular subject 'I'. 'Academy research' is incorrect; it should be 'academic research'. 'We could academic book' is ungrammatical and unclear; corrected to 'academic books'. 'Is' should be 'are' to agree with plural 'books'. 'If I'm trying' should be 'if I try'. 'Library' requires the definite article 'the'.

× I only visits for Academy research we could academic book in my field is super pricey if I'm trying to get online so I usually head to library.

✓ I only visit for academic research because academic books in my field are super pricey if I try to get them online, so I usually head to the library.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. Also, 'academic research' is the correct phrase, not 'Academy research'.

× I only visits for Academy research we could academic book in my field is super pricey if I'm trying to get online so I usually head to library.

✓ I only visit for academic research because academic books in my field are super pricey if I try to get them online, so I usually head to the library.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence lacking proper conjunctions and punctuation. It needs to be divided and connected properly to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× The free access on them this help me a lot to save money.

✓ The free access to them helps me a lot to save money.

The phrase 'access on them' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'access to them'. Also, 'this help' should be 'this helps' to agree with singular subject 'this'.

× The free access on them this help me a lot to save money.

✓ The free access to them helps me a lot to save money.

The verb 'help' should be in third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'this'.

× Yes, if I'm not busy with my schedule, I usually drop by the library and to be honest, you know that I usually hang around the kid corner.

✓ Yes, if I wasn't busy with my schedule, I usually dropped by the library and, to be honest, I usually hung around the kids' corner.

The question is about past habits, so past tense should be used. 'If I'm not busy' should be 'if I wasn't busy'. 'Drop by' and 'hang around' should be in past tense 'dropped by' and 'hung around'. 'Kid corner' should be 'kids' corner' to indicate the corner for kids.

× Yes, if I'm not busy with my schedule, I usually drop by the library and to be honest, you know that I usually hang around the kid corner.

✓ Yes, if I wasn't busy with my schedule, I usually dropped by the library and, to be honest, I usually hung around the kids' corner.

'Kid corner' should be plural possessive 'kids' corner' because it refers to a corner for multiple children.

× There were ton of comics and fairy tales.

✓ There were tons of comics and fairy tales.

The phrase 'ton of' should be pluralized to 'tons of' to indicate a large quantity. The past tense 'were' is correct here.

× No, not too many kid visit the library now because most of material can be accessed online.

✓ No, not too many kids visit the library now because most materials can be accessed online.

'Kid' should be plural 'kids' to agree with 'many'. 'Material' should be plural 'materials' to refer to multiple items.

× No, not too many kid visit the library now because most of material can be accessed online.

✓ No, not too many kids visit the library now because most materials can be accessed online.

The verb 'visit' is correct for plural subject 'kids'. The original sentence had singular 'kid' which is incorrect.

× From what I see children nowadays, they tend to rely more on live resources for both learning and entertainment.

✓ From what I see, children nowadays tend to rely more on live resources for both learning and entertainment.

A comma is needed after 'From what I see' to separate the introductory phrase. The rest of the sentence is correct.