Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to use correct grammar and sentence structure. For example, say 'I seldom go to the library because there are few libraries in my area. Instead, I often download books onto my Kindle to read.' Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'library' too many times.

Ví dụ: I seldom go to the library because there are few libraries in my area. Instead, I usually download books onto my Kindle to read.

Gợi ý: Focus on using correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas logically. For example, say 'I usually read books in the library when I am at university. Before exams, my classmates and I go there to read, practice, and prepare.'

Ví dụ: I usually read books in the library when I am at university. Before exams, my classmates and I go there to read, practice, and prepare.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, say 'No, I did not go to the library as a child because there were few libraries in my area. Instead, I read books at home, especially novels from my aunt, which I enjoyed very much.'

Ví dụ: No, I did not go to the library as a child because there were few libraries in my area. Instead, I read books at home, especially novels from my aunt, which I enjoyed very much.

Gợi ý: Clarify your answer and avoid irrelevant information. Use linking words to make your point clear. For example, say 'I think going to the library is similar for all children, whether Chinese or from other backgrounds. The frequency depends more on personal interest and access rather than ethnicity.'

Ví dụ: I think going to the library is similar for all children, whether Chinese or from other backgrounds. The frequency depends more on personal interest and access rather than ethnicity.

× I seldom go library because my stay area here have less library, so I often download books into my kindle devices to read book instead of going to library.

✓ I seldom go to the library because the area where I stay has fewer libraries, so I often download books onto my Kindle device to read instead of going to the library.

The sentence misses the preposition 'to' after 'go' and uses 'less' incorrectly with countable nouns; 'fewer' is correct for countable nouns like 'libraries'. Also, 'into' should be 'onto' when referring to downloading files to a device. 'Kindle devices' should be singular if referring to one device, and 'read book' should be 'read books' or simply 'read'.

× I seldom go library because my stay area here have less library, so I often download books into my kindle devices to read book instead of going to library.

✓ I seldom go to the library because the area where I stay has fewer libraries, so I often download books onto my Kindle device to read instead of going to the library.

The noun 'library' should be plural 'libraries' when referring to multiple libraries. Also, 'area' is singular and should be matched with 'has' instead of 'have'.

× I seldom go library because my stay area here have less library, so I often download books into my kindle devices to read book instead of going to library.

✓ I seldom go to the library because the area where I stay has fewer libraries, so I often download books onto my Kindle device to read instead of going to the library.

The subject 'area' is singular and requires the verb 'has' instead of 'have'.

× In the library I usually reading books while I am the university. Before the exam we will go to library, to reading, to practicing, to make.

✓ In the library, I usually read books while I am at the university. Before the exam, we go to the library to read, practice, and prepare.

The verb 'reading' should be 'read' to match the present tense. The preposition 'at' is needed before 'the university'. Also, 'go to library' needs the article 'the'. The list of activities should use base verbs without 'to' repeated and be parallel in structure.

× In the library I usually reading books while I am the university. Before the exam we will go to library, to reading, to practicing, to make.

✓ In the library, I usually read books while I am at the university. Before the exam, we go to the library to read, practice, and prepare.

The verb 'reading' is incorrectly used; it should be the base form 'read' after 'usually'. Also, the gerunds 'reading', 'practicing', and 'make' are incorrectly used after 'to'; the base form verbs should be used.

× MMM no because as I say there aren't many libraries in my living areas so that we didn't go to library when I was a kid.

✓ No, because as I said, there weren't many libraries in the area where I lived, so we didn't go to the library when I was a kid.

The phrase 'as I say' should be past tense 'as I said'. 'Living areas' is awkward; 'the area where I lived' is better. 'There aren't' should be past tense 'there weren't' to match 'when I was a kid'. 'Go to library' needs the article 'the'.

× MMM no because as I say there aren't many libraries in my living areas so that we didn't go to library when I was a kid.

✓ No, because as I said, there weren't many libraries in the area where I lived, so we didn't go to the library when I was a kid.

'Living areas' is plural but context suggests a singular area; 'the area where I lived' is more appropriate. Also, 'libraries' is plural and correctly used here.

× I only read book in house.

✓ I only read books at home.

'Read book' should be plural 'read books'. 'In house' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'at home'.

× My aunt has a lot of novel that I'm very enjoy in reading it.

✓ My aunt has a lot of novels that I really enjoy reading.

'Novel' should be plural 'novels'. 'I'm very enjoy' is incorrect; it should be 'I really enjoy'. The pronoun 'it' is unnecessary and incorrect here.

× My aunt has a lot of novel that I'm very enjoy in reading it.

✓ My aunt has a lot of novels that I really enjoy reading.

The preposition 'in' before 'reading' is unnecessary and should be removed.

× So that's it.

✓ So that's it.

No grammatical error detected in this sentence.

× I think it's not about the religion, everyone Chinese or English or anything. Go is the same, same range of going to library.

✓ I think it's not about religion; everyone, Chinese or English or others, goes to the library at about the same rate.

'Everyone Chinese or English or anything' is unclear and ungrammatical; it should be 'everyone, Chinese or English or others'. 'Go is the same' should be 'goes at about the same rate'. 'Going to library' needs the article 'the'.

× I think it's not about the religion, everyone Chinese or English or anything. Go is the same, same range of going to library.

✓ I think it's not about religion; everyone, Chinese or English or others, goes to the library at about the same rate.

The verb 'go' should be 'goes' to agree with the singular subject 'everyone'.