Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy like "there there" and complete your last sentence for clarity. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say: "I don't often go to the library because I work from 9 AM to 5 PM, and also, there isn't a library near my home."

Ví dụ: I don't often go to the library because I work from 9 AM to 5 PM, and also, there isn't a library near my home.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be improved by avoiding repetition and using linking words for coherence. For example, instead of repeating "work," you can say "I usually go to the library to study or work on projects in a quiet environment. Additionally, I meet my study group there to share ideas." Also, clarify "laboratory" if you mean "library."

Ví dụ: I usually go to the library to study or work on projects in a quiet environment. Additionally, I meet my study group there to share ideas and collaborate.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but a bit long and repetitive. Try to be more concise and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid repeating phrases like "there is there is." For example: "I didn't go to the library often as a child because I spent most of my time playing football outside, and there wasn't a library near my house."

Ví dụ: I didn't go to the library often as a child because I spent most of my time playing football outside, and there wasn't a library near my house.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and avoiding repetition like "to to." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example: "Yes, Chinese schools encourage children to visit the library to study and learn new things. Moreover, parents promote reading habits to help their children explore the world."

Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese schools encourage children to visit the library to study and learn new things. Moreover, parents promote reading habits to help their children explore the world.

× Actually I don't have much time to go to library because I am a busy bee.

✓ Actually I don't have much time to go to the library because I am a busy bee.

The noun 'library' is a singular, countable noun and requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place known to both speaker and listener. Omitting 'the' before 'library' is incorrect.

× So it is hard for me to go to the library and another reason is that there there isn't a library in the.

✓ So it is hard for me to go to the library and another reason is that there isn't a library nearby.

The sentence has a repeated word 'there' and ends abruptly with 'in the' which is incomplete. The phrase 'there isn't a library in the' is incorrect and incomplete. It should be corrected to 'there isn't a library nearby' or specify the location properly.

× And I always meet my study group or my project group in the laboratory to work and to share ideas with each.

✓ And I always meet my study group or my project group in the library to work and to share ideas with each other.

The word 'laboratory' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'library' as per the question. Also, the phrase 'share ideas with each' is incomplete; it should be 'share ideas with each other'.

× Actually, if my memory serves me well, I remember that I didn't go to the library frequently because I engaged into other activities like playing outside or playing football in the stadium or in the club and there is there is not a library near my house.

✓ Actually, if my memory serves me well, I remember that I didn't go to the library frequently because I engaged in other activities like playing outside or playing football in the stadium or in the club and there is not a library near my house.

The phrase 'engaged into' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'engaged in'. Also, the phrase 'there is there is not a library' repeats 'there is' unnecessarily. It should be 'there is not a library'.

× Definitely yes, because the schools in the China encourage kids to go to the library to study and to learn something new.

✓ Definitely yes, because the schools in China encourage kids to go to the library to study and to learn something new.

The preposition 'in' should be followed by the country name without 'the' unless the country name includes 'the' (e.g., the United States). 'The China' is incorrect; it should be 'China'.

× In addition to that, parents encourage their children to go to the library to to make it a habit to read books and to learn about the universe.

✓ In addition to that, parents encourage their children to go to the library to make it a habit to read books and to learn about the universe.

The phrase 'to to make' contains a repeated 'to'. Removing the extra 'to' corrects the modal verb usage and infinitive form.