Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more fluent and natural by avoiding repeated fillers like 'uh' and 'so'. Also, structure your answer clearly by starting with a direct response, then adding specific details using linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: No, I don't often go to the library because there isn't one near my house. It is located in the main city center, which is about 20 minutes away from where I live.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add specific supporting details using linking words to make your answer coherent and complete.

Ví dụ: In the library, I usually read books and solve academic problems. For example, when I was in 10th grade, I went to the library daily to practice math problems using books I borrowed.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar by using correct tenses and avoid filler sounds like 'uh'. Start with a direct answer, then add clear and specific details with linking words to enhance coherence.

Ví dụ: No, I did not go to the library often when I was a kid. However, my school had a library, and we had a library period once a week during which we visited it.

Gợi ý: Avoid hesitation and repetition. Give a clear and concise answer, and use linking words to compare or contrast ideas. Also, try to provide more specific information or examples.

Ví dụ: I am not sure if Chinese kids often go to the library. However, Indian kids usually visit libraries frequently because many libraries are located near cities.

× No, I don't go to library because my house was, uh, my house was at the side of the, my hometown.

✓ No, I don't go to the library because my house was, uh, my house was at the side of my hometown.

The sentence misses the definite article 'the' before 'library'. In English, 'library' is a countable noun and usually requires an article. The correct phrase is 'go to the library'.

× So uh, so there was, uh, so there is no library nearby.

✓ So, uh, there was, uh, no library nearby.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'there is' when referring to a past situation. Since the context is past, 'there was' should be used consistently. Also, the phrase 'so there was, uh, so there is no library' is redundant and confusing; it should be simplified.

× The library was in the main city center in between the city that was about 20 minutes from my house.

✓ The library was in the main city center, which was about 20 minutes from my house.

The phrase 'in between the city' is incorrect and unnecessary. The sentence should clearly state the location and distance. 'Which was about 20 minutes from my house' correctly describes the location.

× I usually read books and solve my problems that I have in my academics.

✓ I usually read books and solve the problems that I have in my academics.

The phrase 'my problems that I have in my academics' is awkward. Using 'the problems' is more natural and specific. Also, 'academics' is better preceded by 'my' to indicate possession.

× So when I am in when I was in 10th class, I daily go go to library and solve the solve my math problems from the books taken from the.

✓ So when I was in 10th class, I used to go to the library daily and solve my math problems from the books taken from there.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly. Since the time is past ('when I was in 10th class'), past tense or past habitual tense ('used to go') should be used. Also, 'go go' is a repetition error, and 'to library' needs the article 'the'. The sentence was incomplete and is corrected for clarity.

× No, I did not go to library when I am a kid, but I remember our school.

✓ No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid, but I remember our school.

The phrase 'go to library' needs the article 'the'. Also, 'when I am a kid' is incorrect because the time is past; it should be 'when I was a kid'.

× Our school has a library when we have a library period in UH in about a week.

✓ Our school had a library, and we had a library period about once a week.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses. Since the context is past, 'has' should be 'had'. Also, 'in UH in about a week' is unclear and corrected to 'about once a week' for clarity.

× So we go library UH when I was a kid.

✓ So we went to the library when I was a kid.

The phrase 'go library' needs the article 'the' and the correct past tense verb 'went' instead of 'go'. 'UH' is unclear and removed for clarity.

× I did not have so much information about that Chinese kids often go to library or not, but I but I tell you that Indian kids often go to library because the libraries are nearby the city.

✓ I do not have much information about whether Chinese kids often go to the library or not, but I can tell you that Indian kids often go to the library because the libraries are near the city.

The sentence incorrectly uses past tense 'did not have' when referring to current knowledge; present tense 'do not have' is appropriate. Also, 'go to library' needs the article 'the'. The phrase 'nearby the city' is incorrect; 'near the city' is correct.