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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you often go to the library?

Thí sinh

No, I don't often go to the library. However, I especially visit to the library before my exam because I have to review the class contents and prepare for the exam. The environment is awesome for me.

Giám khảo

What do you usually do in the library?

Thí sinh

I usually study in the library. I think library is one of the best location where I studied because it is very quiet and makes me relaxed. Also library get me concentrate on studying.

Giám khảo

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Thí sinh

Yes, I used to visit to the library with my families on weekends. The library systems give me big motivations to read because library staff give me the stamp. The stamp numbers is the same as the book I finished reading.

Giám khảo

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Thí sinh

Yes, they often go to the library because there are many Public Library in the city. They often be to the library with their friends after school so that they can enter to the library for free. The environment of library get them improve their skills.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you often go to the library?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、文法の誤り("visit to the library"は不自然)や冗長な表現があります。より自然で効果的な表現にし、文を簡潔にまとめることが重要です。

Ví dụ: No, I don't often go to the library. However, I usually visit it before exams to review my class materials because the quiet environment helps me concentrate.

What do you usually do in the library?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 文法の誤り("library is one of the best location"は単数・複数の不一致、"library get me concentrate"は不自然)や語彙の選択に注意が必要です。接続詞を使って文をつなげ、より自然な表現を心がけましょう。

Ví dụ: I usually study in the library because it is very quiet and helps me relax. Moreover, the peaceful atmosphere allows me to concentrate better on my studies.

Did you go to the library when you were a kid?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 文法の誤り("visit to the library"、"families"は単数形"family"が適切)、語彙の選択、そして説明の明確さに改善の余地があります。より具体的で自然な表現を使いましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to visit the library with my family on weekends. The library staff motivated me to read by giving me stamps for each book I finished, which encouraged me a lot.

Do Chinese kids often go to the library?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 文法の誤り("Public Library"は複数形"public libraries"、"They often be to the library"は不自然)、語彙の選択、文の構造に注意が必要です。接続詞を使い、より論理的で自然な回答を目指しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, Chinese kids often go to public libraries because there are many in the city. They usually visit with their friends after school, which helps them improve their skills in a quiet environment.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I especially visit to the library before my exam because I have to review the class contents and prepare for the exam.

I especially visit the library before my exam because I have to review the class contents and prepare for the exam.

'Visit' is a transitive verb and does not require the preposition 'to' after it. The correct form is 'visit the library', not 'visit to the library'.

Incorrect use of the definite article

× I think library is one of the best location where I studied because it is very quiet and makes me relaxed.

I think the library is one of the best locations where I studied because it is very quiet and makes me relaxed.

When referring to a specific place like 'library' in this context, the definite article 'the' is needed. Also, 'location' should be plural 'locations' to match 'one of the' structure.

Singular and plural issue

× I think library is one of the best location where I studied because it is very quiet and makes me relaxed.

I think the library is one of the best locations where I studied because it is very quiet and makes me relaxed.

The phrase 'one of the best' requires the noun following it to be plural, so 'location' should be 'locations'.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Also library get me concentrate on studying.

Also, the library helps me concentrate on studying.

The original sentence is ungrammatical. 'Get me concentrate' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'helps me concentrate'. Also, 'the' is needed before 'library'.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Yes, I used to visit to the library with my families on weekends.

Yes, I used to visit the library with my family on weekends.

'Visit' does not require the preposition 'to'. Also, 'families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family.

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, I used to visit to the library with my families on weekends.

Yes, I used to visit the library with my family on weekends.

'Families' is plural, but when referring to one's own family, the singular 'family' is correct.

Incorrect use of the definite article

× The library systems give me big motivations to read because library staff give me the stamp.

The library system gives me big motivation to read because the library staff gives me the stamp.

'Library system' is singular and needs the definite article 'the'. 'Motivations' should be singular 'motivation' as it is uncountable here. 'Library staff' is singular collective noun and needs 'the'. Also, subject-verb agreement corrected to 'gives'.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× The library systems give me big motivations to read because library staff give me the stamp.

The library system gives me big motivation to read because the library staff gives me the stamp.

'Library system' is singular, so the verb should be 'gives'. 'Library staff' is treated as singular collective noun here, so 'gives' is correct.

Singular and plural issue

× The stamp numbers is the same as the book I finished reading.

The number of stamps is the same as the number of books I finished reading.

'Stamp numbers' is incorrect; it should be 'number of stamps'. Also, 'book' should be plural 'books' to match the number of stamps.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× They often be to the library with their friends after school so that they can enter to the library for free.

They often go to the library with their friends after school so that they can enter the library for free.

'Be to the library' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'go to the library'. Also, 'enter to the library' is incorrect; it should be 'enter the library' without 'to'.

Incorrect use of the definite article

× There are many Public Library in the city.

There are many public libraries in the city.

'Public Library' should be plural 'public libraries' and not capitalized unless part of a proper noun. Also, 'many' requires plural noun.

Singular and plural issue

× There are many Public Library in the city.

There are many public libraries in the city.

'Library' should be plural 'libraries' to agree with 'many'.

Incorrect use of the definite article

× The environment of library get them improve their skills.

The environment of the library helps them improve their skills.

'Library' needs the definite article 'the'. Also, 'get them improve' is incorrect; 'helps them improve' is correct.

Subject-verb agreement errors

× The environment of library get them improve their skills.

The environment of the library helps them improve their skills.

'Environment' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' not 'get'.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

AwesomeBreathtaking
BestFinest; To the highest standard
BigLarge; Elder; Important; Ambitious
FreeWithout charge; Unencumbered by; Vacant; Independent; On the loose
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
QuietSilent; Soft; Peaceful; Unobtrusive
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