Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "enjoy visit library" instead of "enjoy visiting the library." Also, try to avoid redundancy by combining ideas more smoothly. Use linking words like "but" or "however" correctly to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: No, I don't often go to the library because there aren't many in my city. However, I enjoy visiting one whenever I get the chance, as I find it a peaceful place to read and study.

Gợi ý: Your answer is repetitive and lacks clear structure. Try to avoid repeating phrases like "reading books" multiple times. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific details. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as "reach my mind" which is unclear.

Ví dụ: Whenever I go to the library, I usually read books because I enjoy learning new things. Moreover, I find sitting in a quiet place helps me concentrate and improve my skills.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear but contains some grammatical errors, such as "I come" instead of "I came" and "I only start going library" instead of "I only started going to the library." Try to use past tense consistently and add linking words for better flow.

Ví dụ: No, I never went to a library when I was a child because I came from a rural area in Shanxi province where there were no libraries. I only started going to the library when I was at college.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrases, such as "Yuman experiences" and "prefer set their children to tutoring school." Try to express your ideas more clearly, use correct verb forms, and avoid repetition. Also, use linking words to connect your points logically.

Ví dụ: I don't think Chinese children go to the library very often. Many parents prefer to send their children to tutoring schools to improve their skills and achieve high scores, as they believe these schools offer more help with subjects like math and English than simply reading books at the library.

× I do enjoy visit library wherever I get a chance as I find it a peaceful place to read and study.

✓ I do enjoy visiting the library wherever I get a chance as I find it a peaceful place to read and study.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a verb in the '-ing' form, so 'visit' should be corrected to 'visiting'. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× I do enjoy visit library wherever I get a chance as I find it a peaceful place to read and study.

✓ I do enjoy visiting the library wherever I get a chance as I find it a peaceful place to read and study.

The noun 'library' is a singular countable noun and should be preceded by the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place.

× Every time I go to library just for reading books because I really enjoy reading books and can learn a lot of knowledge and teach me a lot of useful skills and I really enjoy sitting a quiet place and reading and studying and reach my mind.

✓ Every time I go to the library just for reading books because I really enjoy reading books and can learn a lot of knowledge and teach me a lot of useful skills and I really enjoy sitting in a quiet place and reading and studying and reaching my mind.

The noun 'library' requires the definite article 'the' as it refers to a specific place. Also, 'a quiet place' needs the preposition 'in' to indicate location.

× I really enjoy sitting a quiet place and reading and studying and reach my mind.

✓ I really enjoy sitting in a quiet place and reading and studying and reaching my mind.

The verb 'sit' requires the preposition 'in' when referring to a location. Also, parallel verb forms should be consistent; 'reach' should be 'reaching' to match the other gerunds.

× No, I never went to a library when I was a kid because I come from a rural area in Shanxi province.

✓ No, I never went to a library when I was a kid because I came from a rural area in Shanxi province.

The verb 'come' should be in the past tense 'came' to match the past time frame indicated by 'when I was a kid'.

× I only start going library when I was in college.

✓ I only started going to the library when I was in college.

The verb 'start' should be in past tense 'started' to match the past time frame. Also, 'going' should be followed by the preposition 'to' and 'library' requires the definite article 'the'.

× I only start going library when I was in college.

✓ I only started going to the library when I was in college.

The verb 'start' should be in the past tense 'started' to agree with the past time reference 'when I was in college'.

× I only start going library when I was in college.

✓ I only started going to the library when I was in college.

The verb 'go' requires the preposition 'to' when indicating movement towards a place.

× Many Chinese parents prefer set their children to tutoring school to improve their skills to get high scores because they believe those training school provide more more skill help with subjects like math and English rather than just reading a book at a library.

✓ Many Chinese parents prefer to send their children to tutoring schools to improve their skills and get high scores because they believe those training schools provide more skill help with subjects like math and English rather than just reading a book at a library.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb, so 'prefer set' should be 'prefer to send'. 'Tutoring school' should be plural 'tutoring schools' to match the context. Also, 'training school' should be plural 'training schools'. The phrase 'more more skill help' is redundant and should be corrected to 'more skill help'. The conjunction 'and' is needed to connect 'improve their skills' and 'get high scores'.