Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
No, I don't often go to the library because I don't have such a free time, but in my usual day I read some articles on the news on the Internet.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
I don't usually go to the library, but if I would I will be just going to read some books.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
No, I did not go to the library when I were a kid because most of the time I were just playing with my friends football. But if I can go back to the time to that time I will definitely go go to the library.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I believe most of the Chinese kids read books because in meantime we see the Chinese people are highly educational.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy by not repeating similar ideas. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, you can say: "I don't often go to the library because I have a busy schedule. However, I usually read news articles online."
Ví dụ: I don't often go to the library because I have a busy schedule. However, I usually read news articles online to stay informed.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural by using correct conditional forms and avoiding unnecessary words. Also, add linking words to improve coherence. For example: "I don't usually go to the library, but if I did, I would read some books to learn more."
Ví dụ: I don't usually go to the library, but if I did, I would read some books to learn more about different subjects.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Use correct verb forms and tenses to make your answer grammatically accurate. Also, avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. For example: "No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I spent most of my time playing football with my friends. However, if I could go back, I would definitely visit the library more often."
Ví dụ: No, I didn't go to the library when I was a kid because I spent most of my time playing football with my friends. However, if I could go back, I would definitely visit the library more often.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Make your answer clearer and more natural by using appropriate linking words and correct expressions. For example: "Yes, I believe most Chinese kids often go to the library because education is highly valued in China."
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe most Chinese kids often go to the library because education is highly valued in China.
× No, I don't often go to the library because I don't have such a free time, but in my usual day I read some articles on the news on the Internet.
✓ No, I don't often go to the library because I don't have much free time, but on a usual day I read some articles on the news on the Internet.
The phrase 'such a free time' is incorrect because 'time' is an uncountable noun and should not be preceded by 'a' or 'such a'. Instead, 'much free time' is the correct quantifier to express a lack of free time.
× I don't usually go to the library, but if I would I will be just going to read some books.
✓ I don't usually go to the library, but if I did, I would just go to read some books.
In conditional sentences, 'if' clauses use the past simple tense ('if I did') and the main clause uses 'would' for hypothetical situations. Using 'if I would' is incorrect. Also, 'will be just going' is awkward; 'would just go' is the correct form.
× No, I did not go to the library when I were a kid because most of the time I were just playing with my friends football.
✓ No, I did not go to the library when I was a kid because most of the time I was just playing football with my friends.
The subject 'I' requires the past tense verb 'was' instead of 'were'. Also, 'playing with my friends football' is incorrect; it should be 'playing football with my friends' to show correct word order and preposition use.
× But if I can go back to the time to that time I will definitely go go to the library.
✓ But if I could go back to that time, I would definitely go to the library.
For hypothetical past situations, 'if' clauses use 'could' and the main clause uses 'would'. 'If I can' is incorrect here. Also, 'go go' is a repetition error and should be corrected to a single 'go'.
× Yes, I believe most of the Chinese kids read books because in meantime we see the Chinese people are highly educational.
✓ Yes, I believe most Chinese kids read books because in the meantime we see that Chinese people are highly educated.
The phrase 'in meantime' is missing the definite article 'the'. Also, 'highly educational' is incorrect when describing people; the correct adjective is 'highly educated'. Adding 'that' improves sentence clarity.