Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I seldom go to the library because due to my hectic schedule I didn't get to go library.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
Most of the time I spend reading books on the library, but when the exams are near, I focus on this my study material to get good score on their exams. Moreover, I like to write assignments there.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Unfortunately, no. When I was a kid, my parents didn't love me to go to library. In addition, a local teacher taught me the syllabus, so that's why I didn't get a chance to go library.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Unfortunately, no. Due to their hectic schedule and intense competition, they didn't go. They don't go to the library and spend more time in their studies.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by avoiding redundancy and using proper tense. Also, keep the answer concise and clear. For example, instead of saying "because due to my hectic schedule I didn't get to go library," say "because of my hectic schedule, I rarely have time to visit the library."
Ví dụ: I seldom go to the library because of my hectic schedule, which leaves me little free time to visit.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to make your answer coherent. Also, avoid grammatical errors and be specific. For example, say "I usually read books in the library, but when exams approach, I focus on my study materials to score well. Additionally, I like to write assignments there."
Ví dụ: I usually read books in the library, but when exams approach, I focus on my study materials to score well. Additionally, I like to write assignments there.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Use correct expressions and grammar. Instead of "my parents didn't love me to go to library," say "my parents didn't allow me to go to the library." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.
Ví dụ: Unfortunately, no. When I was a kid, my parents didn't allow me to go to the library. Moreover, a local teacher taught me the syllabus, so I didn't have the chance to visit the library.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and improve coherence by using linking words. Also, use present tense consistently when talking about general facts. For example, "Unfortunately, Chinese kids often don't go to the library because of their hectic schedules and intense competition. Instead, they spend more time studying."
Ví dụ: Unfortunately, Chinese kids often don't go to the library because of their hectic schedules and intense competition. Instead, they spend more time studying.
× I didn't get to go library.
✓ I didn't get to go to the library.
The sentence is missing the preposition 'to' before 'the library' which is necessary after the verb 'go'. Also, 'didn't get to go' correctly uses the modal verb structure to express inability in the past.
× Most of the time I spend reading books on the library,
✓ Most of the time I spend reading books in the library,
The correct preposition to use with 'library' when referring to being inside the place is 'in' not 'on'. 'On' is used for surfaces, so 'in the library' is appropriate here.
× I focus on this my study material to get good score on their exams.
✓ I focus on my study material to get a good score on my exams.
The phrase 'this my study material' is incorrect; it should be 'my study material'. Also, 'good score' needs an article 'a' before it. 'Their exams' is incorrect as the subject is 'I', so it should be 'my exams'.
× my parents didn't love me to go to library.
✓ my parents didn't want me to go to the library.
The verb 'love' is incorrectly used here; 'want' is more appropriate to express permission or desire. Also, 'to go to library' is missing the article 'the' before 'library'.
× I didn't get a chance to go library.
✓ I didn't get a chance to go to the library.
The phrase 'go library' is missing the preposition 'to' before 'the library'. The correct form is 'go to the library'.
× Due to their hectic schedule and intense competition, they didn't go.
✓ Due to their hectic schedule and intense competition, they don't go.
The question is about a habitual action in the present, so the verb should be in the present tense 'don't go' instead of past tense 'didn't go'.