Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve kelime seçimi sorunları var. Cümleniz doğal değil ve anlamı tam olarak net değil. Daha kısa ve doğrudan cevaplar verin, ayrıca çoğul ve tekil uyumuna dikkat edin. Örneğin, 'I am a university students' yerine 'I am a university student' demelisiniz. Ayrıca, 'look after quiet place' ifadesi yanlış, 'look for a quiet place' daha doğru olur.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because I am a university student and I need a quiet place to focus on my lessons, especially those that require memorization.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda tekrarlar ve dolgu kelimeler fazla. Ayrıca, cümle yapısı ve kelime seçimi daha doğal olmalı. 'Study work up' ifadesi anlam açısından belirsiz. Daha açık ve akıcı cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri birbirine bağlayın.

Ví dụ: I usually study in the library because it is very quiet, which helps me concentrate better, especially when I need to memorize information.

Gợi ý: Cümlelerinizde dilbilgisi ve kelime hataları var. 'A new constructions' yanlış, 'new constructions' veya 'new libraries' daha doğru olur. Ayrıca 'government relies this lack of Ness' ifadesi anlamsız. Daha açık ve doğru ifadeler kullanın. Cümleleri daha kısa ve net yapın.

Ví dụ: Unfortunately, I didn't go to the library as a child because there was no library in my hometown. However, recently the government has built many new libraries to address this issue.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda dolgu kelimeler çok fazla ve cümle yapısı karışık. 'Kids to visit library have has been increased' ifadesi yanlış. Daha düzgün ve akıcı cümleler kurun. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümleleri mantıklı şekilde bağlayın ve gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın.

Ví dụ: These days, more Chinese children visit libraries because many parents understand how important libraries are for improving their children's concentration.

× Yes, I can benefit from library too often because I am a university students and I usually look after quiet place to focus on more my lessons or lessons based on memorizations so libraries more proper.

✓ Yes, I can benefit from the library too often because I am a university student and I usually look for a quiet place to focus more on my lessons or lessons based on memorization, so libraries are more proper.

The word 'students' should be singular 'student' to match the singular subject 'I'. 'Library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place. 'Look after' is incorrect here; the correct phrase is 'look for' when searching. 'Memorizations' is incorrect; the uncountable noun 'memorization' should be used. 'Libraries more proper' is incomplete and needs a verb; 'libraries are more proper' is correct.

× I usually study work up in library because umm uh library is so quiet and when I memorize anything I need a quiet place a lot. Uh and library meet these umm requirements for me.

✓ I usually study or work in the library because the library is so quiet, and when I memorize anything, I need a quiet place a lot. The library meets these requirements for me.

The phrase 'study work up' is incorrect; it should be 'study or work'. 'Library' needs the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific place. 'Library meet' should be 'library meets' to agree with the singular subject. The sentence structure is improved by adding commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× Unfortunately I didn't because in my hometown a library didn't exist in the past. But these days a new constructions to create library has been increased a lot because government relies this lack of Ness.

✓ Unfortunately, I didn't because in my hometown a library didn't exist in the past. But these days, new constructions to create libraries have increased a lot because the government recognizes this lack.

The phrase 'a new constructions' is incorrect; 'constructions' is plural and should not have 'a'. 'Library' should be plural 'libraries' to match 'constructions'. 'Has been increased' is passive and awkward; 'have increased' is active and correct. 'Government relies this lack of Ness' is incorrect; it should be 'the government recognizes this lack'. 'Lack of Ness' is not a word; 'lack' alone is correct.

× These days, the number of, umm, kids to visit library have uh, has been increased a lot because many parents realize uh, the importance of the library for students, uh, concentrations.

✓ These days, the number of kids visiting the library has increased a lot because many parents realize the importance of the library for students' concentration.

'Kids to visit library' should be 'kids visiting the library' for correct verb form and article usage. 'Have uh, has been increased' is incorrect; 'has increased' is correct because 'number' is singular. 'Students, uh, concentrations' should be 'students' concentration' to show possession and correct noun form.