Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to respond directly and clearly, avoid redundancy, and use correct grammar. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: I don't often go to the library because I prefer reading books and watching movies online. However, there is a large and old library near my house that has many Asian books. I visited it once and found it very interesting.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but lacks fluency and contains filler words like 'umm'. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid unnecessary fillers. Also, use correct tense and sentence structure.

Ví dụ: I usually read novels in the library, especially when I want to relax. Additionally, if my exams are approaching, I go there to study course books. I often bring my laptop with me to access study materials.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by avoiding fillers and making sentences more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: I did not often go to the library as a kid, but my school had a library. Our class had one period dedicated to reading there, where I enjoyed reading comics and novels.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains many fillers and incomplete sentences. Try to organize your ideas clearly, use linking words, and avoid fillers. Also, complete your sentences and explain your points fully.

Ví dụ: Nowadays, many Chinese kids prefer reading online because it is easily accessible on their phones or iPads. However, some children still visit libraries because they offer a different and valuable experience.

× I don't go off into library.

✓ I don't go to the library.

The preposition 'off into' is incorrect here. The correct preposition to indicate going to a place is 'to'. So, 'go to the library' is the proper phrase.

× I watch and I read move.

✓ I watch movies and I read.

The word 'move' is incorrect; it should be the plural noun 'movies' to match the context of watching films.

× I don't go often to library, but yeah, once I went to library, it's beside my house and it's a huge and old library.

✓ I don't often go to the library, but yeah, once I went to the library; it's beside my house and it's a huge and old library.

The adverb 'often' should come before the verb 'go' for correct word order. Also, 'library' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific place.

× Well, it have many books in Asian books and.

✓ Well, it has many Asian books.

The subject 'it' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' instead of 'have'. Also, 'in Asian books and' is incomplete and unclear; it is corrected to 'many Asian books' for clarity.

× I usually read books in libraries, especially umm, the novels I guess.

✓ I usually read books in the library, especially novels, I guess.

When referring to a specific library previously mentioned, use 'the library' instead of 'libraries'. Also, 'the novels' is unnecessary; 'novels' alone is sufficient.

× So yeah, I go to library for studies purpose too and reading course books.

✓ So yeah, I go to the library for study purposes too and to read course books.

'Library' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Studies purpose' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'study purposes'. Also, 'reading course books' is better expressed as 'to read course books'.

× But umm, mostly I took my laptop with myself.

✓ But umm, mostly I take my laptop with me.

'Took' is past tense but context suggests present habit, so 'take' is correct. Also, 'with myself' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'with me'.

× I never went to library as a kid.

✓ I never went to the library as a kid.

The definite article 'the' is needed before 'library' when referring to a specific place.

× There was a library in my school and we heard the whole class used to have a one period for a library where we used to read novels and more, and I used to read comics books there.

✓ There was a library in my school, and I remember the whole class used to have one period for the library where we used to read novels and more, and I used to read comic books there.

'We heard' is incorrect in this context; 'I remember' fits better. 'A one period' should be 'one period'. 'For a library' should be 'for the library'. 'Comics books' should be 'comic books'.

× So like nowadays kids are mostly on their phone and like prefer reading online 'cause umm yeah, they're available easily on phone and yes, especially the kids, uh, have iPad in their hands.

✓ So nowadays, kids are mostly on their phones and prefer reading online because, yeah, they're easily available on phones, and yes, especially kids have iPads in their hands.

'On their phone' should be plural 'phones' to match plural subject. 'Available easily on phone' should be 'easily available on phones'. 'Have iPad' should be 'have iPads' to agree in number.

× So why do you want to? Why there's no need to go to library.

✓ So why would you want to? There's no need to go to the library.

The question 'So why do you want to?' is incomplete and awkward; 'So why would you want to?' is better. 'Why there's no need' is incorrect; it should be a statement 'There's no need'. Also, 'to library' needs 'the' before 'library'.

× But yeah, some of them visit library too, cause library hold a different.

✓ But yeah, some of them visit the library too, because the library holds something different.

'Visit library' needs 'the library'. 'Cause' should be 'because' for formal correctness. 'Library hold' should be 'library holds' for subject-verb agreement. 'Hold a different' is incomplete; 'holds something different' is clearer.