Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid filler words like 'umm'. Also, improve sentence structure for clarity and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, start with a clear topic sentence, then explain the reason with linking words such as 'because' or 'since'.

Ví dụ: No, I don't often go to the library now because I have access to digital libraries. However, I used to visit the library frequently when I was a student since the internet was not widely available then.

Gợi ý: Avoid repeating filler words and unclear phrases. Use clear and natural expressions. Also, use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to explain your points logically. Try to be more specific about what you do in the library.

Ví dụ: Usually, I read books in the library because the quiet environment helps me concentrate. Also, being surrounded by others who are studying motivates me to focus more.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words and be more precise with your details. Use linking words like 'and' or 'but' to connect ideas. Also, clarify the time period for returning books if possible, or state clearly if you are unsure.

Ví dụ: Yes, I went to the library a lot as a child. I could borrow books for a limited period, usually around 10 to 20 days, before returning them.

Gợi ý: Avoid saying you don't know; instead, try to give a general opinion or guess. Use clear sentences and linking words to organize your answer. Also, avoid unclear phrases and improve vocabulary for clarity.

Ví dụ: I am not sure about all Chinese kids, but in the place where I live, most children don't visit libraries often. Instead, they prefer using the internet and digital libraries for their studies.

× But yeah, I used to go to the library when I was a student, umm 'cause it said time we did not have umm, Internet and all these materials which is available right now.

✓ But yeah, I used to go to the library when I was a student, umm 'cause at that time we did not have umm, Internet and all these materials which are available right now.

The phrase 'it said time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'at that time' to indicate a specific past period. Also, 'which is available' should be 'which are available' because 'materials' is plural, so the verb must agree in number.

× ...and all these materials which is available right now.

✓ ...and all these materials which are available right now.

The noun 'materials' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× It's obvious to read the book, but sometimes if you don't have a umm, motivation to read or to learn umm in this in the library, the environment is umm, contagious and umm you have more, umm, more motivation, uh, to read and learn.

✓ It's obvious to read books, but sometimes if you don't have umm, motivation to read or to learn umm in the library, the environment is umm, contagious and umm you have more, umm, motivation, uh, to read and learn.

The phrase 'read the book' is too specific; 'read books' is more general and appropriate. Also, 'contagious' is incorrectly used to describe an environment; the correct adjective is 'contagious' is usually for diseases, so 'inspiring' or 'encouraging' would be better, but since the instruction is to correct only grammar mistakes, we keep it. The phrase 'more, umm, more motivation' is redundant; 'more motivation' suffices.

× And sometimes that was a possibility to borrow a book from the library.

✓ And sometimes it was possible to borrow a book from the library.

The phrase 'that was a possibility' is awkward; 'it was possible' is the correct modal verb usage to express ability or permission in the past.

× And there was some limited period, umm, I don't really remember, but like, uh, 1020 days and then you have to return the books back.

✓ And there was a limited period, umm, I don't really remember, but like, uh, 10-20 days and then you have to return the books.

The phrase 'some limited period' should be 'a limited period' because 'period' is singular and countable. Also, 'return the books back' is redundant; 'return the books' is sufficient.

× I don't really have this information and I never googled and I have no idea. I have Chinese kids often go to the library, but place where I live and I live in Rudyard, please see people.

✓ I don't really have this information and I never googled it and I have no idea. I have Chinese kids often go to the library, but in the place where I live, and I live in Rudyard, please see people.

The phrase 'never googled' needs an object, so 'googled it' is correct. Also, 'but place where I live' is missing the preposition 'in' before 'the place'. The phrase 'please see people' is unclear and likely a mishearing or error, but since it is not a grammar problem from the list, it is left as is.

× I have Chinese kids often go to the library, but place where I live and I live in Rudyard, please see people. Kids nowadays don't go to the library, they use all the Internet and digital library.

✓ I don't know if Chinese kids often go to the library, but in the place where I live, and I live in Rudyard, people don't go to the library nowadays; they use the Internet and digital libraries.

The original sentence is unclear and grammatically incorrect. 'I have Chinese kids often go' is incorrect; it should be 'I don't know if Chinese kids often go'. Also, 'all the Internet' is incorrect; 'the Internet' is uncountable and does not take 'all the'. 'Digital library' should be plural 'digital libraries' to match 'Internet' as a general resource. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammar.