Library— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，例如“it's very and it provide a clean surrounding”不完整且不自然。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和主谓一致，同时避免重复和冗余。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often go to the library because it is quiet and provides a clean environment. I like to study there and read the latest books. Also, when I feel stressed, I find the library a peaceful place to relax.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，如“do my homework on the review my courses”不正确。建议使用连贯的句子结构，合理使用连接词，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I usually do my homework and review my courses to prepare for exams. Sometimes, I read books that interest me or listen to music with my earphones.

Gợi ý: 回答中句子断裂较多，且时态使用不够准确。建议合并短句，注意时态一致性，并使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: No, I didn't. When I was a child, I preferred playing computer games or other more interesting games rather than going to the library to study. So, I didn't visit the library before I started primary school.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如“child children”和时态混用。建议简化表达，注意单复数和时态一致，使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think Chinese children usually go to the library because their parents encourage them to study and read extracurricular books to broaden their horizons. Therefore, most Chinese kids visit the library when they are young.

× I think library is very quiet and it's very and it provide a clean surrounding.

✓ I think the library is very quiet and it provides a clean surrounding.

这里缺少定冠词'the'，因为特指图书馆。'library'前应加'the'。

× it's very and it provide a clean surrounding.

✓ it's very quiet and it provides a clean surrounding.

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，'provide'应改为'provides'。

× So I like to go there to study or to address recent books and when I was filled down I also will go to library to.

✓ So I like to go there to study or to read recent books, and when I was feeling down I would also go to the library.

'address recent books'用词错误，应为'read recent books'。'filled down'应为'feeling down'。'will go to library to'结构不完整，且缺少定冠词。

× I usually do my homework on the review my courses to prepare for the exam and sometimes I just read some books that I interested in or just listen to music where the earphone.

✓ I usually do my homework and review my courses to prepare for the exam, and sometimes I just read some books that I am interested in or just listen to music with earphones.

'do my homework on the review'结构错误，应拆分为两个动作。'that I interested in'缺少be动词'am'。'listen to music where the earphone'应为'listen to music with earphones'。

× No, I didn't. When I was a child. I prefer to play computer games or other more interesting game rather than go to the library to study.

✓ No, I didn't. When I was a child, I preferred to play computer games or other more interesting games rather than go to the library to study.

描述过去的习惯应使用过去时，'prefer'应改为'preferred'。

× other more interesting game rather than go to the library to study.

✓ other more interesting games rather than go to the library to study.

'game'应为复数形式，因为前面有'other'，表示多个游戏。

× So I didn't go to the library before I went to the primary school.

✓ So I didn't go to the library before I went to primary school.

'primary school'前通常不加定冠词'the'，除非特指某一所学校。

× Yes, I think the Chinese child children usually go to the library before because the parents will ask them to study or read some extracurricular books and something else to expand their horizons.

✓ Yes, I think Chinese children usually go to the library because their parents ask them to study or read some extracurricular books and other things to expand their horizons.

'child children'重复，去掉'child'。'something else'应改为'other things'更合适。

× So I think most of the Chinese children will go to the library when they were young.

✓ So I think most Chinese children went to the library when they were young.

'will go'与'when they were young'时间不一致，应使用过去时'went'。