Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you often go to the library?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often go to the library because I am a student so I have a homework, many homework and so the rivalry mood is very quiet so it can focus on my study so.
Giám khảo
What do you usually do in the library?
Thí sinh
When I have a homework, umm, I usually do my homework, but umm, when I have nothing to do, I choose my books.
Giám khảo
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I was a child, I usually go to the library. Hmm and.
Giám khảo
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Thí sinh
I'm not Chinese.
Do you often go to the library?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but needs to be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. For example, say "I often go to the library because it is quiet and helps me focus on my homework."
Ví dụ: I often go to the library because it is a quiet place where I can concentrate on my homework without distractions.
What do you usually do in the library?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and be more specific. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "I usually do my homework there, but if I have free time, I like to browse and choose books to read."
Ví dụ: I usually do my homework in the library, but when I have free time, I enjoy browsing and selecting interesting books to read.
Did you go to the library when you were a kid?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors. Use past tense consistently and complete your thoughts. For example, "Yes, I often went to the library when I was a child because I loved reading books."
Ví dụ: Yes, I often went to the library when I was a child because I loved reading books and learning new things.
Do Chinese kids often go to the library?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Your answer does not address the question. Try to answer based on your knowledge or say you are not sure. For example, "I am not sure, but I think many Chinese kids do go to the library to study and read."
Ví dụ: I am not sure, but I believe many Chinese children often visit libraries to study and read books.
× I have a homework, many homework and so the rivalry mood is very quiet so it can focus on my study so.
✓ I have homework, a lot of homework, and the library is very quiet so I can focus on my study.
The word 'homework' is an uncountable noun and should not be used with 'a' or 'many'. Instead, use 'a lot of homework' to express quantity. Also, 'rivalry mood' seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'library'. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.
× When I have a homework, umm, I usually do my homework, but umm, when I have nothing to do, I choose my books.
✓ When I have homework, umm, I usually do my homework, but umm, when I have nothing to do, I choose my books.
Again, 'homework' is uncountable and should not be preceded by 'a'. Removing 'a' makes the sentence grammatically correct.
× Yes, when I was a child, I usually go to the library. Hmm and.
✓ Yes, when I was a child, I usually went to the library.
The sentence refers to a past habitual action, so the verb should be in the past tense 'went' instead of the present tense 'go'.
× Yes, when I was a child, I usually go to the library. Hmm and.
✓ Yes, when I was a child, I usually went to the library.
The phrase 'Hmm and.' is incomplete and does not form a proper sentence. It should be omitted or completed to maintain sentence structure.